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by Bmoonwriter

schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellen example of a one-shot! It can be finished the way it is or you could continue with it! Cheers to you! Please keep up the good work!
person anich
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a very well and beautiful written story
person ^CH^
schedule April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeeez... that was hot... way hot...

I mosty definitely think you did a good job, yep yep!!