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by Bmoonwriter

schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so darling. I reread it, I loved it so much. :) Fantastic piece.
person Missy
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was so sweet
person Captain_Joho
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Loved loved loved this story. I think I read it four times. I must admit I love all your fem slash stuff. keep up the good work.
person anich
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very beautiful story. I enjoyed reading every world of it
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you did a good job of giving the charaters a personality and made them seem like real people. most people will make their lesbians just fucking bimbos and sluts but you stayed away from that good job

5 OUT OF 5
person ^CH^
schedule April 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad... not bad atall

It\'s something new to see you write in third-person, don\'t think I\'ve seen it from you before... ahh well, it still rocked :D
person BlueMoonWriter
schedule April 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, thank you for reviewing :) I really appreciate you taking the time to write your thoughts and just so you know, it does real good to my writer\'s ego ;)
I\'ve decided to try my hand at a bit of third person storytelling (though \"All I Wanna Do...\" was also in third person), to see how it goes. Glad to hear it worked out alright.
Thanks again,
BMW

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