rate_review Reviews

I am extremely impressed with this story. It\'s completely original, which sounds odd being the fact it\'s in the original catagory, but this story holds an idea and a concept that has yet to be presented before you. I love your characterization of Master (Can\'t remember his real name right now. Wait, isn\'t it Alekshander?) how he is always so timid when his blood lust is trying to take over. Overall, I love it to death. I check the origials archive everyday for the soul reason to see if you updated becuase I love it that much. On that note, please update soon.

Amore,
Elvra

Wow, that was great! It was really catchy and i couldn\'t stop reading. PLEASE hurry and add to the story, i can\'t wait to find out what happens next.

Checked your story. A very intresting read even while I found the visual descrption of the monster to be lacking. I can easily fill out the blanks if it is human girl...but I can\'t tell how something that is not human looks like unless you tell me. Keep the good work.

TC

Nicely done. Two chapter update. My fav ^^ Cant wait to see what goes on. Keep up your work, you\'re doing awesome.

Very very good so far. I\'m in love with this story. I haven\'t read a good story sense adultfan fudged up their site. This is great though. I hope you write soon:)

I\'m gonna be your biggest fan and your gonna get tired of me but I must review! ^^ Great job on the chapter, very descriptive, just how I like it. Cant wait for the next update and have a good Easter!

Once again another very well written chapter. I\'m glad to hear you will be updating. I indeed am into this story now, and I can\'t wait to see what happens. I love your characters by the way. Very good ^^ Keep up the good work.

I love this so far, please continue.

Very interesting start. Can\'t wait to find out more.

~Diana