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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Now you get to update again! Good chapter I liked it. Anyway, I have to go to work. update!
Elvra
Elvra
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a bit heavy, but good..
or maybe it\'s just late...
or maybe it\'s just late...
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was very good, short, but considering your surcumstances...sorry about your pet, it sucks when that happens. Anyway, i just wanted to comment on how wonderful this story truly is thank you for sharing. I have one under harry potter in the general section called We Be Slayers, just in case you wanted to check it out,. :) anywho, great job, please keep it up. i like how Kari became more confident and more comfortable with Alek in this chapter, i\'m curoous how else she\'ll change. :)
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i read it and had to puase for a moment..I have to say i love how your moving their relationship along. it seems their moments alone are very deep and emotional. I have to say i just love it...
I hope if Kari is invloved with this war that Alek will help enchance a few of those fighting skill she did learn at her school. even if she said she dosen\'t fight, she still learn somthing right?
Alek can protect her all the time right. Maybe you should fix Kari up with a nice weapon something she can use.
by the way sorry for the death of your pet. I hope you need a healthier one this time.
And please please keep writing. my hands are shaking waiting for the next chapter. Something good is going to happen i can just feel it!!!!!!
I hope if Kari is invloved with this war that Alek will help enchance a few of those fighting skill she did learn at her school. even if she said she dosen\'t fight, she still learn somthing right?
Alek can protect her all the time right. Maybe you should fix Kari up with a nice weapon something she can use.
by the way sorry for the death of your pet. I hope you need a healthier one this time.
And please please keep writing. my hands are shaking waiting for the next chapter. Something good is going to happen i can just feel it!!!!!!
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May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^0^ Eeeeee, I am loving this story!
Ch. 1: I really enjoyed how the story started out and how it didn\'t drag to get the plot going. One thing though, I would\'ve liked to see a bit more physical descriptions of Kari and Master, but my imagination has filled that in for now. :3
Ch. 2: Oh dear, I quite enjoyed the sexual tension at the end of this chapter. X3 Twas very nice! It\'s also refreshing to see such an original storyline developing, too.
Ch. 3: I adored the development between the relationship between Kari and Master at this point. :3 Also, all the teasing Master did to Kari...<3333 Loved it! One thing I would have to say is that once the foreplay was done and they er *ahem* moved on, I thought it ended a bit quickly. Perhaps it\'s just me, but I would\'ve liked to see a bit more before they climaxed.
Ch. 4: I\'ve gotta admit, I thought this chapter was going to be just some filler when I first started it (necessary filler, not pointless!) but when I read the end of it I was all like \"O____O!!!! WHAT\'S HAPPENED TO MASTER?!\" and I frantically tried to move onto the next chapter. D: However, my internet was being a doodie-head (conspiring against me as always...) and didn\'t wanna load anything for a while. But after a few well-placed bitchslaps, it conceded and I moved onto the next chapter quite happily. ^.^
Ch. 5: Oh. My. God. X3 The plot thickening in this chapter is amazing! It makes me all giggly with anticipation and I can\'t wait to read more!
Ch. 6: I love how the reader is informed about the nature of Master through Kari\'s questions and Master\'s answers. :3 It\'s so much better than just having paragraph after paragraph of narrative over it like I\'ve seen before (and am sometimes guilty of writing myself...) ^^;;
Ch. 7: @__@ I had to go take me a cold shower after this chapter. That\'s how hot it was. Seriously. <3333 And I also realize that it wasn\'t just pointless sex, which makes it so much better!
Ch. 8: I congratulate you one making me do a girly squeal with this chapter! >< I usually stay far far away from cute fluffy things unless approaching them with something destructive, like a flamethrower or a machine gun, but this chapter actually made me do one of those \"Awwwwww!\"s (I can\'t believe I just admitted that...T__T Curse you for breaking me down!) I mean, come on, the lines “What if the little bird loves the horrid monster?” and the dialogue after that couldn\'t not get a reaction out of me! T__T I loved it so much, it should be a sin. ...In fact, I\'m sure that it is now...
Anyways, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter of Monster! ^0^ I\'m very eager to see how the relationship between Kari and Alek will develop and also how the plot will continue from here, especially now that Kari is no longer a Sali and yet they\'re still both goin\' after the bad guys! Damn I love this story--can\'t reiterate that enough. Keep up the good work! ^.^
(Note: I hope that this reveiw goes through. I\'ve only tried reviewing a story once and it didn\'t work, so my apologies if it messes up somehow! ><)
Ch. 1: I really enjoyed how the story started out and how it didn\'t drag to get the plot going. One thing though, I would\'ve liked to see a bit more physical descriptions of Kari and Master, but my imagination has filled that in for now. :3
Ch. 2: Oh dear, I quite enjoyed the sexual tension at the end of this chapter. X3 Twas very nice! It\'s also refreshing to see such an original storyline developing, too.
Ch. 3: I adored the development between the relationship between Kari and Master at this point. :3 Also, all the teasing Master did to Kari...<3333 Loved it! One thing I would have to say is that once the foreplay was done and they er *ahem* moved on, I thought it ended a bit quickly. Perhaps it\'s just me, but I would\'ve liked to see a bit more before they climaxed.
Ch. 4: I\'ve gotta admit, I thought this chapter was going to be just some filler when I first started it (necessary filler, not pointless!) but when I read the end of it I was all like \"O____O!!!! WHAT\'S HAPPENED TO MASTER?!\" and I frantically tried to move onto the next chapter. D: However, my internet was being a doodie-head (conspiring against me as always...) and didn\'t wanna load anything for a while. But after a few well-placed bitchslaps, it conceded and I moved onto the next chapter quite happily. ^.^
Ch. 5: Oh. My. God. X3 The plot thickening in this chapter is amazing! It makes me all giggly with anticipation and I can\'t wait to read more!
Ch. 6: I love how the reader is informed about the nature of Master through Kari\'s questions and Master\'s answers. :3 It\'s so much better than just having paragraph after paragraph of narrative over it like I\'ve seen before (and am sometimes guilty of writing myself...) ^^;;
Ch. 7: @__@ I had to go take me a cold shower after this chapter. That\'s how hot it was. Seriously. <3333 And I also realize that it wasn\'t just pointless sex, which makes it so much better!
Ch. 8: I congratulate you one making me do a girly squeal with this chapter! >< I usually stay far far away from cute fluffy things unless approaching them with something destructive, like a flamethrower or a machine gun, but this chapter actually made me do one of those \"Awwwwww!\"s (I can\'t believe I just admitted that...T__T Curse you for breaking me down!) I mean, come on, the lines “What if the little bird loves the horrid monster?” and the dialogue after that couldn\'t not get a reaction out of me! T__T I loved it so much, it should be a sin. ...In fact, I\'m sure that it is now...
Anyways, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter of Monster! ^0^ I\'m very eager to see how the relationship between Kari and Alek will develop and also how the plot will continue from here, especially now that Kari is no longer a Sali and yet they\'re still both goin\' after the bad guys! Damn I love this story--can\'t reiterate that enough. Keep up the good work! ^.^
(Note: I hope that this reveiw goes through. I\'ve only tried reviewing a story once and it didn\'t work, so my apologies if it messes up somehow! ><)
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May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>> well fuck, it appears not all of my review went through...my apologies ^^;;; *condenses it*
Ch. 3: I adored the development between the relationship between Kari and Master at this point. :3 Also, all the teasing Master did to Kari...<3333 Loved it! One thing I would have to say is that once the foreplay was done and they er *ahem* moved on, I thought it ended a bit quickly. Perhaps it\'s just me, but I would\'ve liked to see a bit more before they climaxed.
Ch. 4: I\'ve gotta admit, I thought this chapter was going to be just some filler when I first started it (necessary filler, not pointless!) but when I read the end of it I was all like \"O____O!!!! WHAT\'S HAPPENED TO MASTER?!\" and I frantically tried to move onto the next chapter. D: However, my internet was being a doodie-head (conspiring against me as always...) and didn\'t wanna load anything for a while. But after a few well-placed bitchslaps, it conceded and I moved onto the next chapter quite happily. ^.^
Ch. 5: Oh. My. God. X3 The plot thickening in this chapter is amazing! It makes me all giggly with anticipation and I can\'t wait to read more!
Ch. 3: I adored the development between the relationship between Kari and Master at this point. :3 Also, all the teasing Master did to Kari...<3333 Loved it! One thing I would have to say is that once the foreplay was done and they er *ahem* moved on, I thought it ended a bit quickly. Perhaps it\'s just me, but I would\'ve liked to see a bit more before they climaxed.
Ch. 4: I\'ve gotta admit, I thought this chapter was going to be just some filler when I first started it (necessary filler, not pointless!) but when I read the end of it I was all like \"O____O!!!! WHAT\'S HAPPENED TO MASTER?!\" and I frantically tried to move onto the next chapter. D: However, my internet was being a doodie-head (conspiring against me as always...) and didn\'t wanna load anything for a while. But after a few well-placed bitchslaps, it conceded and I moved onto the next chapter quite happily. ^.^
Ch. 5: Oh. My. God. X3 The plot thickening in this chapter is amazing! It makes me all giggly with anticipation and I can\'t wait to read more!
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May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, I feel like such a moron. I can\'t even sent a reveiw properly...sorry \'bout that! T__T Here\'s another shot cos I really want you to get my reveiw!
Ch. 3: I adored the development between the relationship between Kari and Master at this point. :3 Also, all the teasing Master did to Kari--Loved it! One thing I would have to say is that once the foreplay was done and they er *ahem* moved on, I thought it ended a bit quickly. Perhaps it\'s just me, but I would\'ve liked to see a bit more before they climaxed.
Ch. 4: I\'ve gotta admit, I thought this chapter was going to be just some filler when I first started it (necessary filler, not pointless!) but when I read the end of it I was all like \"O____O!!!! WHAT\'S HAPPENED TO MASTER?!\" and I frantically tried to move onto the next chapter. D: However, my internet was being a doodie-head (conspiring against me as always...) and didn\'t wanna load anything for a while. But after a few well-placed bitchslaps, it conceded and I moved onto the next chapter quite happily. ^.^
Ch. 5: Oh. My. God. X3 The plot thickening in this chapter is amazing! It makes me all giggly with anticipation and I can\'t wait to read more!
Ch. 3: I adored the development between the relationship between Kari and Master at this point. :3 Also, all the teasing Master did to Kari--Loved it! One thing I would have to say is that once the foreplay was done and they er *ahem* moved on, I thought it ended a bit quickly. Perhaps it\'s just me, but I would\'ve liked to see a bit more before they climaxed.
Ch. 4: I\'ve gotta admit, I thought this chapter was going to be just some filler when I first started it (necessary filler, not pointless!) but when I read the end of it I was all like \"O____O!!!! WHAT\'S HAPPENED TO MASTER?!\" and I frantically tried to move onto the next chapter. D: However, my internet was being a doodie-head (conspiring against me as always...) and didn\'t wanna load anything for a while. But after a few well-placed bitchslaps, it conceded and I moved onto the next chapter quite happily. ^.^
Ch. 5: Oh. My. God. X3 The plot thickening in this chapter is amazing! It makes me all giggly with anticipation and I can\'t wait to read more!
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May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again, sorry about all the posting ^^;;;
Ch. 6: I love how the reader is informed about the nature of Master through Kari\'s questions and Master\'s answers. :3 It\'s so much better than just having paragraph after paragraph of narrative over it like I\'ve seen before (and am sometimes guilty of writing myself...) ^^;;
Ch. 7: @__@ I had to go take me a cold shower after this chapter. That\'s how hot it was. Seriously. <3333 And I also realize that it wasn\'t just pointless sex, which makes it so much better!
Ch. 8: I congratulate you one making me do a girly squeal with this chapter! >< I usually stay far far away from cute fluffy things unless approaching them with something destructive, like a flamethrower or a machine gun, but this chapter actually made me do one of those \"Awwwwww!\"s (I can\'t believe I just admitted that...T__T Curse you for breaking me down!) I mean, come on, the lines “What if the little bird loves the horrid monster?” and the dialogue after that couldn\'t not get a reaction out of me! T__T I loved it so much, it should be a sin. ...In fact, I\'m sure that it is now...
Anyways, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter of Monster! ^0^ I\'m very eager to see how the relationship between Kari and Alek will develop and also how the plot will continue from here, especially now that Kari is no longer a Sali and yet they\'re still both goin\' after the bad guys! Damn I love this story--can\'t reiterate that enough. Keep up the good work! ^.^
Ch. 6: I love how the reader is informed about the nature of Master through Kari\'s questions and Master\'s answers. :3 It\'s so much better than just having paragraph after paragraph of narrative over it like I\'ve seen before (and am sometimes guilty of writing myself...) ^^;;
Ch. 7: @__@ I had to go take me a cold shower after this chapter. That\'s how hot it was. Seriously. <3333 And I also realize that it wasn\'t just pointless sex, which makes it so much better!
Ch. 8: I congratulate you one making me do a girly squeal with this chapter! >< I usually stay far far away from cute fluffy things unless approaching them with something destructive, like a flamethrower or a machine gun, but this chapter actually made me do one of those \"Awwwwww!\"s (I can\'t believe I just admitted that...T__T Curse you for breaking me down!) I mean, come on, the lines “What if the little bird loves the horrid monster?” and the dialogue after that couldn\'t not get a reaction out of me! T__T I loved it so much, it should be a sin. ...In fact, I\'m sure that it is now...
Anyways, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter of Monster! ^0^ I\'m very eager to see how the relationship between Kari and Alek will develop and also how the plot will continue from here, especially now that Kari is no longer a Sali and yet they\'re still both goin\' after the bad guys! Damn I love this story--can\'t reiterate that enough. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story and I do so hope that you will finish this one out until the very end because I have read a lot of abandonded stories. And most of them were really good.
Keep up all of the wonderful work,
Lady Pheonix
Keep up all of the wonderful work,
Lady Pheonix
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a enjoyable story! I can\'t wait to see what happens next, please don\'t leave us hanging for too long.