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by Bmoonwriter

person omgitsme!
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Best ive read in a long while ^^
person Invisible Me
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, as cute and incredibly hot as this story was, I just have one complaint. I just got back from a cruise, and I'm kind of regretting it now, because I didn't have NEARLY this much fun. So thank you, for raising my standards for the next one I go on...that's just mean...but seriously, great story. I give it a 9 out of 10 on my imaginary rating scale.
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautiful
person Ryvik
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot hot hot!!

i DEFINATELY love your writings, miss!!!!!
I can\'t wait this summer so I can publish my own!!
(i have to type them first..)

angi
person ^CH^
schedule April 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome writing, as always!

I\'m really glad to be able to read more of your stories - and even happier to be your first reviewer -

Keep it up