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LOL! I loved the image of them climbing out the window to escape the adoring villagers. Too funny!

As for the rest of it, you certainly know how to build suspense! I\'m on absolute pins and needles, and I can\'t stop wondering what information the seer has to impart. Don\'t keep me waiting too long!

Love,
Falcon

Cool! I really liked the way Aivon was tempted to give into his demon heritage, but resisted. And, in fact, used his humanity to defeat his father. Very emotionally satisfying. And in the beginning, when John was taunting the demons -- that was funny. Poor, stupid demons. I look forward to finding this seer and learning more about what\'s going on.

Love,
Falcon

\"You know I enjoy it when you remove my work and I do yours.\" Have you been removing my work when I\'m not looking? *Wink* Sorry, normally I don\'t pick at typos, but that one was just too funny.

Great couple of chapters! The sex scene was very nicely done. I found your description of Jessica being \"as wet as the sea\" particularly evocative. And Aivon\'s confrontation with his father was quite tense. Poor Aivon. I look forward to the butt-kicking that he, John, and Jessica are going to give to those demons!

Love,
Falcon

Yay! A new chapter. Or maybe I missed this one when I did my last review? Anyway, it\'s new to me.

It\'s cool that Aivon is going to be forced to confront his demon father. I was hoping something like that might happen. And I look forward to some of that M/F you hinted at!

Love,
Falcon

This move to a new server certainly has been frustrating! But I can always count on you to keep writing and posting your story, no matter what. Nice new part. Interesting hint about an upcoming challenge for Aivon, and I loved the image of Jessica tossing snowballs for John to blast with his magic. Although, it seems like Jonh is beginning to doubt himself, and that can\'t be good. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Unless AFF disappears up its own ass, that is.

Love,
Falcon