rate_review Reviews

Ooooh...naughty Rosemary. xD ^^; Wow...funny how completely wrong Julen is for her. Seeing her perspective was really interesting...but the kinds of things she wants from a man. o_O Like, the total opposite of poor innocent Julen over here. ^^ And the way Sebastian described her...by calling her \'Rose\' instead of \'Mary\'...and the thorns......totally cool. Once again, one of those brilliant little twidbidgets of information that you toss in and make it brilliant!

\'Wager me a kiss from your husband\'s lips.\' *smirk* xD And, so begins the lovely slashyness...sort of. Made me happy regardless. :]

As always, I can\'t wait to see more of this...I can see the framing of your predictably-unpredictable and terribly complicated cobweb of a plot beginning to form. Awesome as ever. Post more soon! ^^

-Moonstar

^_^ I think I\'d return to Aff just for your stories alone. Once agian, you\'ve captured my attention and held me enraptured from begginning to end. Your characterization is stunning, and I absolutely LOVE Julen! The way you convey his perfect devotion the simple, beautiful things in life, and his religion. It\'s touching and amazing. He\'s so.....innocent. Or pure. Maybe that\'s a better word...pure inside and out, body and soul. ^^

Sebastian is awesome too, obviously very different from Julen...but the way he carressed the wings at the beggining...and how he accepted being called by his name in the presence of Julen and his wife...it shows he\'s not a completely snotty, cruel ruler. The way he dismissed Julen\'s heartfelt gifts of feathers and flowers though, telling him that women wanted things like the necklace, made me mad at him...but I suppose that\'s the sort of life he\'s used to. I think he could learn a lot from Julen\'s simpler approach to life... But regardless, I\'m looking forward to future updates! I\'m glad I returned to check up here...even if it\'s STILL not completely fixed....v_v But yeah, great job again, Falcon. ^_^

-Moonstar

First I would like to say that your imagery is absolutely amazing. You are definetly VERY blessed with a talent to bend the english language to your will, and you do so quite beautifully. I look forward to future chapters!

Damn, I got shivers from the last paragraph. Kricky! Your analogies decorate your work like...like damn good analogies... they\'re (honestly!) the BEST analogies I\'ve ever read. Like Rosemary\'s blush. I don\'t think I\'ve ever heard it described like that. It brought to mind quite a fetching picture. The turn of phrase just filled in the setting. I could almost smell what their little cottage looked like, so to speak! I absolultely love it. The Prince seems so ominous somehow, and Julen is so innocent. And I bet Rosemary knows a few more things than Julen...and, Oh, darn, you have woven your web, and I, poor fly, have stepped upon its threads! (I\'m not screaming!)

Falcon! There you are! Been wondering where you\'ve gotten to... well, your faithful reader/reviewer is back for more and my story will be updated soon too! Plus... working on another story... a sequel to an original you have seen...

Can\'t say much! Lots to do!

Snidne, signing out!