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Well, another captive audience member here! Very nice work. I'm looking forward to updates!

I wonder. it's been a really long while since you update your story. It would be a big waste if you put it in hiatus. I love your story specially this story very much

Amazing! I can't believe I haven't come across one of your works before.

The way you write leaves me breathless. I am fully draw into your story now. I can't wait to read more.

I just loved your 'Sugar Hearts' trilogy, and it looks like this story is off to a great start! I can't wait to read more. Hurryhurryhurryhurryhurry!

It\'s a great stories! I really hope that you will update soon. Looking forward to your next chapter. Ne, this story is M/f or M/M. Who you gonna make Julen be with? Rosemary or Sebastian? I really hope it\'s Sebastian. It\'ll be more interesting cause some people say just evil can raise angel and beside I like Sebastian plus his evilness.

@3: I find the characters are caught up in the powerful grip of destiny and I\'m wondering what Theodosia will be like. It all sounds so Byzantium-like. It really reminds me of Medieval times. I like that your main characters are always so loaded with unappreciated talent. It\'s like the underlying cause of the cure and the disease. Excellent ending with the daisy. So innocent, such sinister foreshadowing. Thanks, Falc. A treat like always. Look forward to the journey

Very nice. Looks like troubled roads await Julan and Rosemary. Wonder what they will encounter... and how it will change them. It seems like the wings will also play some kind of important role in this... And they way to described how Julan looked different when he sang... yes, very ominous indeed...

Keep up the greatness!

Wow. Your chapters always feel so short! And yet...there\'s always a thousand wonderful things to comment about. The scene at the very beginning with Julen and the well...gotta love that. I know the rejuvinating feel of cold clean water on a tired body from experience, and your description brought it immediately to life in mind\'s eye. (And a what very lovely picture that was too. xD) I also especially liked the way you described his singing...it just makes me want to be there and listen and here it...while all have in reality is my poor excuse for an imagination struggling conjure up some idea of what something so beautiful, powerful, and grief-striken would sound like.

Last of all though...I really find myself caught up in the foreshadowing and symbolism you have going on. As always, you have the best similies and metaphores ever created in existence...and you\'re using it perfectly to describe the trap both Julen and his wife are falling into...this great web of things to come, starting with how you talk about his guilt over this web of thorny lies he\'s just beginning. Where you compared it to stepping in thorns...then not being able to pull out without causing so much damage.....but overall I think the most striking, vivid moment you put in was at the very end...when Julen was giving a last attempt to comfort his wife...and then the flower slipped from his fingers. Those last two sentences in your final paragraph really got my heart caught up in my chest with that silent feeling of anticipation, anxiety, and dread.

I can\'t imagine what you have in store next for them all...but I can\'t wait to find out. Your work is truly as much an inspiration as much as it is a pleasure to read. Terrific work.

-Moonstar

How could you... how could you even THINK of puting down those words in the beginning, \'I hope your not dissapointed\'. That\'s like someone writing a sex story, with no sex scenes in it! It\'s just not really possible! Your a great writer, and we all love your stories. ^_^

And on that note, very good chapter. It\'s nice to see things from another perspective for it lets you fill in gaps or tie up loose ends... Rosemary losing that bet will probably be the setting motion for that M/M you said was gonna be here... One chain link of events leading on, spiraling out infinately as time unravels itself into eternity... ok that was a little bit off, but you get the idea. Time to see where this seemingly harmless act, will take us.

Snidne, out.

@2: YIppee ya yay ya yho! Chapter two, still oh, my pounding heart! What imagry, I feel as if I\'m rolling around like a pig in a field of wildflowers! I particularly liked the word \"loathsome\" OOOOh, I got shivers! (I know its only a word, but wow, you used it so aptly it resounded like the perfect stanza in a line of music!) I\'m entthralled. I\'ve been checking your story on a daily basis, so you must forgive the opening sentence of this review. I\'m not even wondering about the sinister implications of the action, I am so happy to read the words on that page, you have no idea. I think I\'ve gone batty. Rosemary is like a nexus in the hub of a propeller! Not only has she divided feelings within her, the two opposites that vie for her love and affection have divided her very name! Oh, you clever girl you! I think my vision just improved! I grin like a fool. I have consumed your well-wrought chapter within seconds of laying my eyes upon it, Oh, greedy soul am I!