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for Your Wish Is My Command

by lotusbloom

person Eatingahotdog
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love the ideas in this story! It's so cute, and funny. :-) You're a great writer, and I'm looking forward to your next update!

Cheers,

Mz. HotDOG
person ShadowofLight
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(ROFLAO)Oh dear gods I don't know who to feel more sorry for! A genine who's used having his masters/mistresses get into his pants ASAP or Madison for being saddled with him? Oh this is good and I still like how Madison is so original and realistic! The nickname was a bit harsh but it's like onna those old sayings about the quiet ones are hte ones you should fear most. Or as I remember from the movie My Big Fat Greek Wedding, "We may be lambs in the kitchen, but we're tigers in the bedroom." That still makes me smile. Well I'm really glad you updated. Who knows, maybe the night out will um help move things along :p laterz!
person Laura
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please write more.
person Sonyasha
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is coming along very well, I can't wait to read more please update soon.

Ja-Ne =^_^=
person Yukie Nakamura
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your style of writing. Will there be more to the Genie's personality?
Can't wait for your next chaps...
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome keep it coming but make thr chapters longer
person msb
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurry and update.....
person kitkat
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, keep it up. I'm sure she's going to warm up soon
person Sonyasha
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. its just you havent updated in a loooong time. please update soon.

Ja-Ne =^_^=
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I really wish you would update. This is so good and unique! :D, <3