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for Your Wish Is My Command

by lotusbloom

schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that you update this story soon! I really like it and would like to see more!!
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I love your story and I would like to see where it goes. Its just getting to the good parts! I hope you will find it in your heart to update for this poor, humble reviewer. Thanks!
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh No, Not a short chapter!!!!! But I'm sure the next will be just as fun. These two need to meet in the middle of the bedroom and realize they need eachother. Glad to see you are writing this story again, I have been enjoying it a great deal.

Keep up the great work.
person ShadowofLight
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ouch! i on't know who to feel more sorry for. i honestly thought they would go at it like rabbits but i guess i'm pleased u proved me wrong. shoot poor genine and maison! well can't wait to read the next update :D
person Cariad
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooh good chapter! I just asstumed they'd fall into bed and that would be that but oh no! YOu had to be more clever than that!! Heh heh well done you i'm dying to read on now!
C xx
person Sonyasha
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow you should have made the chapter longer. you left of with a cliffy. but man, this is getting good. please update this really soon. i wanna read what will happen next. and make it long.^^

Ja-Ne =^_^=
person Yuihe
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's so true to how I felt growing up! I just wanted to stay clear of the hurt everyone tells me about.
Sigh, more please... I want to know how she'll fall in love.
person Yuihe
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oH! MORE! wow, I've been waiting for a story like this. Aja!
person Polly
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, come on then! Update! You know you wanna..... this is a really good story - you have a great sense of humour and i can't WAIT to see what Madison does with her genie!!
Polly xx
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really fun story! Can't wait to read more!