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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is there anything better than coming home from a week long vacation and finding that your favourite story has been updated. Not in my opinion, no.
This chapter is... shocking, to say the least. He's a mage?!! He's going to cleanse himself??! Were's the fun in that!!? *grits teeth in frustration*
Oh alright. I suppose it will benefit the great allmighty ending of this fic in some very important way. But still....! I cant help but feel exactly as Lark does. My poor Naeven-smitten heart is aching in despair over here. Not that it will stop me from wanting more chapters of course. Like Naeven said "This is nothing". I'll manage. *sniff*
Oh and before I forget.. "Ready for a little magic" That line was brilliant. The dot over the i so to speak.
Cheers, Lioncourt
This chapter is... shocking, to say the least. He's a mage?!! He's going to cleanse himself??! Were's the fun in that!!? *grits teeth in frustration*
Oh alright. I suppose it will benefit the great allmighty ending of this fic in some very important way. But still....! I cant help but feel exactly as Lark does. My poor Naeven-smitten heart is aching in despair over here. Not that it will stop me from wanting more chapters of course. Like Naeven said "This is nothing". I'll manage. *sniff*
Oh and before I forget.. "Ready for a little magic" That line was brilliant. The dot over the i so to speak.
Cheers, Lioncourt
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your updates are the highlight of my day! I look forward to reading more!
(I know, not very constructive, but you know what, there's very little I could criticize about your writing). Keep up the amazing work.
(I know, not very constructive, but you know what, there's very little I could criticize about your writing). Keep up the amazing work.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are one of greatest. Please, if you ever publish any of your work I will be sure to buy it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!!! -Ahem- I just read this, I swear. I leave, I come back, and look! Bwhahahaa! I am rewarded with great shmexiness. -smirk- Hehe. ANYway...yes. It is soooooo nice to read some good, pretty smut-ish stuff from a wonderful author like YOU...after reading nothing but 'classic literature' and passages where I have to rip apart every word in every sentence to find the 'deep meaning' behind things. T_T Learning and its joys, right? Meh. It actually hasn't been too bad. Except for the fact that I've had no time whatsoever to write...but oh well! At least, eventually, I manage to find my way here for long enough to read. Oi, and now that I've rambled on forever on things not pertaining even the least little bit to your most recent chapter...allow the gushing to begin!
I KNEW Naeven was going to clean the water, I just knew it! Hah! So he does have good in him! With...rather...possibly selfish reasoning behind it all...but I don't think he's all selfish!! I mean...he wouldn't hurt Lark. T_T I know this; Lark doesn't. So -sigh-, I am forced to wait through the long and grueling process of getting Lark over his sexual phobias!! Actually, I say he did a pretty good job this chapter. Mmm...kisses. Not lip kisses...but still! -love-
I think it's good to see Lark taking a more forward stance, especially the way you portrayed it, because, obviously, he's been through a lot, and being defenseless just really, really unnerves him. He can't stand it, no matter how hard he tries. But...if he's the one in control...it's different. Maybe I take this the wrong way, because Sactaren is certainly big and powerful and all that, but I think I could see Lark topping somewhere along the line. I know other reviewers have described him as almost girly or whatever...but the way you write him, I see him as the underdog mostly because he's a slave. He doesn't see himself as anything, and so, of course, he wouldn't take initiative without prodding buuuttttt....in other ways he doesn't seem strikingly feminine at all. Very rugged almost at times. And then we have the eloquent, dignified mage with lonnnnngggg pretty pretty hair, and- -cuts off abruptly- -whine- Damn, I'm so impatient. I know I have no room to talk...but you need to write this faster. T_T I swear...I could read this all day. Such lovely possibilities.
Nice twist, btw. We see Lark with magic! Wah! But...that means he won't have any more excuses to use! -cry- Oh well...they seem to be getting slowly, slowly closer maybe? Revealing a little of Lark's past, Lark getting to know Sactaren a bit better....... I'm just waiting for the moment when Lark finally ditches "M'Lord" and says "Naeven" direct, out in the open and with a bright mind all his own for the first time. That......will be a moment where I squeal outright and scare my roommates.
G'luck with writing! Wonderful, wonderful job. -muchmuchlove- ^^
-Moonstar
I KNEW Naeven was going to clean the water, I just knew it! Hah! So he does have good in him! With...rather...possibly selfish reasoning behind it all...but I don't think he's all selfish!! I mean...he wouldn't hurt Lark. T_T I know this; Lark doesn't. So -sigh-, I am forced to wait through the long and grueling process of getting Lark over his sexual phobias!! Actually, I say he did a pretty good job this chapter. Mmm...kisses. Not lip kisses...but still! -love-
I think it's good to see Lark taking a more forward stance, especially the way you portrayed it, because, obviously, he's been through a lot, and being defenseless just really, really unnerves him. He can't stand it, no matter how hard he tries. But...if he's the one in control...it's different. Maybe I take this the wrong way, because Sactaren is certainly big and powerful and all that, but I think I could see Lark topping somewhere along the line. I know other reviewers have described him as almost girly or whatever...but the way you write him, I see him as the underdog mostly because he's a slave. He doesn't see himself as anything, and so, of course, he wouldn't take initiative without prodding buuuttttt....in other ways he doesn't seem strikingly feminine at all. Very rugged almost at times. And then we have the eloquent, dignified mage with lonnnnngggg pretty pretty hair, and- -cuts off abruptly- -whine- Damn, I'm so impatient. I know I have no room to talk...but you need to write this faster. T_T I swear...I could read this all day. Such lovely possibilities.
Nice twist, btw. We see Lark with magic! Wah! But...that means he won't have any more excuses to use! -cry- Oh well...they seem to be getting slowly, slowly closer maybe? Revealing a little of Lark's past, Lark getting to know Sactaren a bit better....... I'm just waiting for the moment when Lark finally ditches "M'Lord" and says "Naeven" direct, out in the open and with a bright mind all his own for the first time. That......will be a moment where I squeal outright and scare my roommates.
G'luck with writing! Wonderful, wonderful job. -muchmuchlove- ^^
-Moonstar
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least they're sitting together...
Honestly, though, I can't figure out why Lark still refuses. He wants Sactaren - so, how come??
Really seemed like the stage was set this time.
Honestly, though, I can't figure out why Lark still refuses. He wants Sactaren - so, how come??
Really seemed like the stage was set this time.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
M'azing
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I didn't see that coming at all. I am enjoying your story immensely and I reread it often. I enjoy your detailed descriptions. I become a bit frustrated with Lark because I wish he would be more forthcoming with the mage, but I suppose I have to be patient. I guess I don't really want Lark learning how to cleanse himself either :-). Good work.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, we finally got to see the bedroom and the two of them worked some magic. I feel like their relationship just progressed a whole lot again. The discovery that Lark is a mage is also interesting and caught me totally by surprise. I just hope that that doesn't hinder the progress with each other. Anyway, that was a great update. I don't know anybody that writes as sensual as you do!!! I am so glad I got my weekly fix early.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, wow. That was sad. Poor Lark! Great twist though, I wasn't expecting Lark to turn out to be a mage ^_^
That was a kickass chapater, I love the building sexual tension and the building relationship that's appearing more in the story now. I love how their both getting so close, though they stuff have their moments where they get everything completly wrong.
That was so sweet of Sactaren! Cleaning the well like that because he knew it upset Lark. That was just, aww. Too sweet!
I love Sactaren. He's my favourite charater. And he seems to really care for Lark, so I'm wishing for a happy ending to this story.
Also, that scene where Lark was biting Sactaren's neck and touching him. That was friggin hot. Wonderfull done.
I loved this chapater, just like all the rest. This is a great story with wonderfull charaters. Thank you so much for writing it!
That was a kickass chapater, I love the building sexual tension and the building relationship that's appearing more in the story now. I love how their both getting so close, though they stuff have their moments where they get everything completly wrong.
That was so sweet of Sactaren! Cleaning the well like that because he knew it upset Lark. That was just, aww. Too sweet!
I love Sactaren. He's my favourite charater. And he seems to really care for Lark, so I'm wishing for a happy ending to this story.
Also, that scene where Lark was biting Sactaren's neck and touching him. That was friggin hot. Wonderfull done.
I loved this chapater, just like all the rest. This is a great story with wonderfull charaters. Thank you so much for writing it!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh I just read the lastest chapater again. I can't stop reading this story. I must have read the whole thing at lest five times.
I watched Howls Moving Castle again today and wow, I can see how you got inspired by it. Sactaren does remind me a bit of Howl, more so in the last chapater how he gets ao mad at Lark for breaking his easle. (Spelling) It reminded me of how Howl got mad when his hair changed colour and carried on.
Poor Lark. He never does anything right does he? He tries to be truthfully and nice, but he seems to have no luck. And I hope Sactaren does find out about thouse nasty villagers and does smite them all. That would be great.
Oh And I love Schaff. I know Lark dislike's his attuide, but since I'm just reading about him and don't really have to put up with him, I think he's great. I think he really is in love with Sactaren.
Rayne and Belaeden are wonderfull. I'm so glad they saved Lark in the last chapater. I love how Belaeden never speaks much and Rayne wont shut up. How to see more of them in the future.
Tam, reminds me of a totally crazyed fangirl. Rather like I would be if I really knew Sactaren so I can't hate the girl too much. I feel for the poor guy, putting up with her.
Okay. I'm done. I know you update quite fast, and I'm really glad that you do. So please keep up the steady updates because I really love this story. Your a wonderfull author!
I watched Howls Moving Castle again today and wow, I can see how you got inspired by it. Sactaren does remind me a bit of Howl, more so in the last chapater how he gets ao mad at Lark for breaking his easle. (Spelling) It reminded me of how Howl got mad when his hair changed colour and carried on.
Poor Lark. He never does anything right does he? He tries to be truthfully and nice, but he seems to have no luck. And I hope Sactaren does find out about thouse nasty villagers and does smite them all. That would be great.
Oh And I love Schaff. I know Lark dislike's his attuide, but since I'm just reading about him and don't really have to put up with him, I think he's great. I think he really is in love with Sactaren.
Rayne and Belaeden are wonderfull. I'm so glad they saved Lark in the last chapater. I love how Belaeden never speaks much and Rayne wont shut up. How to see more of them in the future.
Tam, reminds me of a totally crazyed fangirl. Rather like I would be if I really knew Sactaren so I can't hate the girl too much. I feel for the poor guy, putting up with her.
Okay. I'm done. I know you update quite fast, and I'm really glad that you do. So please keep up the steady updates because I really love this story. Your a wonderfull author!