rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to say thanks for updating promptly and I love this story, I can't wait for the nex chapter.

I hope the publisher picks up this story. It's really good; one of the best I've read so far and totally worth the money I will pay to buy it in print.

Good luck on it!

And great chapter, by the way. I look forward to the storm....

i've been following this since someone on the AFF yahoo group (while it was still there) mentioned it as a good read. its the first original i've bothered to read since coming to the site three years ago. i have to say that i've become deeply interested and check back for updates every three or four days or so.

i think its a very good read and can't help but think you've managed to build an excellent story with good characters. there's that ever present hint of something smutty and wonderfully forbidden to come, just enough to keep one interested in the hopes that sex will follow without being a let down when there isn't. if that makes any sense at all. i'd love to see both Lark and Naeven (did i spell it right) consummate their growing need for one another, but the fact that they haven't doesn't make me want to stop reading. in fact, i keep reading in the hopes that i get to see that one blissful act eventually .:grins:.

please keep up the good work and i look forward to more.

~brightest blessings~
ldf

Well, that should theach Naeven not to take it to personally when Lark doesn't want to be thouched...
Oh, and Lark is going to fool Naeven? *laughs and rolls her eyes* Riiiight. That'll work. Remember who's the master of deception here?

And it's really just too sweet when Lark goes;
"Love? No. No, I couldn't - I wouldn't. He's my master."
*smiles* He really has no idea...

Yeah ! Another very good chapter ! Thanks a lot !

so very good want more please

thi is great! i haven't read any story this good before...
i can't wait to read the following, i am anxious to see how it turn out between Lark and Naeven..
o..and i am very interested in the story of Rayne and Belaeden, are you thinking about writing a story on them too??

I suck at reviewing - but I have to tell you - once again - how much I love this story.

And I'm getting REAL fond of Sactaren.

Thank You!

HEY!!!! It's so slow! I want THE MASTER to have a way with HIS SLAVE ALREADY! BUT WHY?! And by the way, who is this 'daughter' of Naeven? Don't tell me that she's the only woman in the castle that is Naeven wife? Where's this daughter go if she's still alive?! HEY IT'S GODLY AWESOME! I mean your story! Kindda angst! But I like angst! GOOD LUCK Cause YOU MAKE THE BORING NEKO NOT BORING AGAIN. Always waiting your next story