rate_review Reviews

Eargh! Another cliffhnager, but boy, don´t ypu do it well? ;( Even though if ths is going to end up with a dead dead main character I am going to fall inn depress...
Daamn you write a hell of a good story! Just in case I am ever able to draw some fanart of it, I would like to you to send me an more detailed description of the cg´haracters for me.
And here is a sample of my works if you are interested enough to let me to picturise your characters....
http://vitna.deviantart.com/gallery/
http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/vitna/
But daa-amn this is a heck of a good fantasy fiction!

I so adore this story. It is one of my favorites and I look forwad greatly to reading more.I love all the vivid characters you have created- even the little rock rat and I can't wait to read more. I really hope you finish this. :)

T_T Maybe I'm just in an emotional mood...but this is truly making me miserable! I swear, I'm crying...and it sucks...can't you just make it happy? Pretty pretty please? Every chapter is making it worse and worse I just can't stand it! I want them to make up sooo much...so, so much... You're a terrific author. Really. And I'm just praying you're not totally cruel. That, at least eventually, good will come in the end. Maybe I can take hope in Lark's last feelings? About a new color? *hopeful puppy eyes*

I love Kivixl by the way. The 'cat-person' is so overly done, but you made it new and revealed it slowly, and by the time he was fully out, you'd created a really believable fiest personality for him. And his reactions to Schaff made me grin...hoping, hoping, hoping that maybe that would mean he'd have to go like Sactaren said...but then you messed it up! Curses. Many, many curses. Maybe Sactaren will just have to rescue him...when Drumar gets all evil...and then pretty mage comes in at the last minute...*wistful fantasy* Ok, ok...so maybe you won't do that. But I BEG OF YOU!! I need some happiness...soon...soon, soon...or at least faster updates. I suppose I should be happy that you've held with it, because some people do abandon their stories...and I am. You've no idea how terribly greatful I am that you haven't abandoned this...but...but...you leave me hanging!!

I can't wait for more. Really. Terrific job!

-Moonstar

*cry* poor poor Lark *cry* *sniff* please update soon, i cant wait anymore. I cryed the moment i read this chapter. God, i love it. It´s so sweet when he suffer *grin* *devil*
yours Nef *thank you for your hard work* *bow*

Argl! First you made me all teary eyed and then you left me with a cliffhanger?!? No this won´t do, I demand next chapter soon!!!
But boy, this story is one of the greatest fantasy story I have readen in a loooong time. You should get that published when it it ready. :)

please finish!!!! And put those two stubbern people together!

Congrats. Your are the first fiction I have ever read in aff.net =3. And must I say i didn't find myself displeased! I like your writing VERY much albeit how only little good I think of the " I " writen fiction. It was the best ever! I've read some fiction elsewhere befor and few fictions around here after, but they didn't even compar; that's sightly disapointing for my part but I hope to see more talented writer like you somwhere around here =3. I won't loose hope. But till now, out off all yaoi story I've read so far, your was the one that "bewitched" me the most *wink* I hope I will be able to see some uplaods from you again, or be noticed if the book is simply published, I will be glad to pay for your work. Oh and I would like to know, do you have a personal website? =3.

Poor Lark and the misunderstandings between him and Sactaren. I just know it was Lord Drumar that wants to buy him to exact some kind of revenge and punishment. I'm glad he saved the red-headed kid. You're keeping me on the edge of my seat with this very engaging, enjoyable story. Looking forward to the next update.

Ahh! Dang, this whole chapter makes me want to jump up and down and scream and bang my head against the wall all at the same time...and that's a good thing...for you. Dangit, dangit, dangit!! Poor Khas...that part almost made me cry. How could you!! I hate it when people have to part with their pets...but so meanly?? Why did he have to shout at the poor thing! I loved their little talking session the night before...how Khas calls Sactaren the 'White Owl'. The simplicity but realisticness of their conversation was cool. Kind of like poetry, but less intricate...in the way that poetry can say a lot with just a few small words.

The interaction between Sactaren and Lark in the hall? You almost had me thinking that something finally might happen...but then no. T_T Still though...how is it, that with all his best intentions and goodwill, Lark always seems to manage to say the wrong thing at the wrong time or missinterpret things said or just...get himself all screwed up? I was praying that he would just listen to Schaff...even after what Schaff said about him...couldn't he tell that he was arguing for his sake? I mean...yes, it sounded bad...but he was trying to change Sactaren's opinion...trying to put the worst case scenerios in his mind out there...or...that's how I saw it. But still...yargh!

In the end, when Lark goes down to market...how did I KNOW that his bleeding-heart was going to get him in trouble again? I just KNEW it. Hearing his thoughts about seeing the slaves...and then the way that boy got treated... I did like it though. Another victory for Lark over Drumar. Even if the old sleezebag doesn't know it... But I don't want Lark to go!! And I can't possibly see how that new boy's going to be a good replacement...but he sure owes Sactaren some money now, doesn't he? :gonk: I suppose that could go good in some ways...but knowing you, it won't be that simple.

I'm absolutely iching for a new chapter!

-Moonstar

I just can't believe this keeps getting better and better. How are you doing this??

Ahhhh - it's magic. Now I got it!

I've been checking for another chapter every day, so glad today was the day. Now - how about getting that next one out say.... tomorrow?

Really, really good - I just love it!