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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
definitely good stuff! realistic, even. one hint though: white space is your friend. Next chapter or fic, divide it into paragraphs so it\'s easier to read.
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June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I lied this story very muc..its one of the few sex fics that ive read an i liit.Cit.CHECK My stpries out..peace
schedule
June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I lied this story very muc..its one of the few sex fics that ive read an i liked it.CHECK My stpries out..peace
schedule
June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have noea hy that me out likeit did..but i liked your fic.
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June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
plz keep wtitin
it so fuuni
it so fuuni
schedule
June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, yeah, I\'m cheap to review my own story, but I can\'t find a way to see my reviews!!! It\'s all evil badness!!!