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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Supercute.
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a nice little vingette! The thoughts/feelings are really expressed well.
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It has the potential to be a really good story just make it a little longer trust me it would be really cool if you put some more length into it.
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: That was purty.
LD: *pout* it was too short.
Karen: Yeah, it was a bit of that, but it was very nice. Gentle and sensitive.
LD: Yuck, mushy. The kiss was nice though ^_^
LD: *pout* it was too short.
Karen: Yeah, it was a bit of that, but it was very nice. Gentle and sensitive.
LD: Yuck, mushy. The kiss was nice though ^_^