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for Trials of Love

by PlatinumPunk

person MillenniumWolf
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Slick:

I like original fics and this one has caught my eye. Please finish as I\'ve yet to fully grasp the concept of this fic. I, lf, lf, may start writing original fiction. But your fic is nicely written. I liked how detailed your thoughts were in expressing the actions. Very nice. I enjoyed reading this short first chapter. I do hope you\'ll continue.

Light of the Moon,
Millennium Wolf
person Cammy White
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I like this fic! It\'s really cool. Nice and detailed an all that other literary mumbo jumbo! I wish I could write... o.o But n e wayz, I liked this story. At least if anyone sues you, it\'s YOURS in the first place... Not that anyone WOULD but... nm... I like it! CONTINUE!?!?!

Cam Cam
person michelle
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey nik...
babe that was amazing, it was so good....you\'e ine intrigued. i\'m excited to read the rest of it. i felt like i was in the apartment, hmmm...can\'t wait to read the rest. you\'re an awesome writer. keep going!!
you have me hooked...and not only on your story ;)

-shelly