rate_review Reviews

You should totally continue this story. Abby's parents could've abandoned her and she can live with Jeff. Then Abby could be Jeff's fuck toy forever. I want Jeff to fuck her everywhere and in every position.

Nice stuff man. I hope I am not the first one to tell you, but just ignore the people that say you shouldn't right about this stuff. As a writer, you are an artist of sorts, and an artist should never be censored/limited as to what they can or cannot write.

I'm sorry but that was intensely mortifying.
Uhhnnn.... *shudder*
For next time please just stick to legal terms.

Jesus.. you can make a story about a 21 year old fucking a 15 year old girl to inspire me but please.. no more pedo!!
:(

Ashleigh.

I really hope these are nothing but harmless fatasies and that you don\'t really want to see such young kids fucking. 8 or so? That\'s just too young. Now that I\'ve gotten the \"eww\" factor out of the way, I will tell you that you write really well. You\'re good with descriptions and all such. What gets me with your stories thought, is that they all seem like they are the start of something longer, yet they\'re one shots. Have you ever considered doing a longer peice with several chapters?

WOW! I never thougt something like that could turn me on. I also read your fic \"Hitchhicker\". Since I am into femdom, I really like the idea of a grown woman and a boy. This is something entirely different than the usual minor stuff. Good work, you really are creative.