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for Never Give Up

by openflame

person Tenshistar
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute. I really liked it. I\'m so glad aff is back on. i missed reading this stuff.
person Shanna
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I like the little temper she displayed in ch 2, but now knowing it exist, I wish she had done something to that punk ex boyfriend in ch 1 after she caught him cheating. You know kick him behind the knees of something. I will follow this story to see what happens please update soon.
person Simone
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great 2nd Chapter!! Can't wait for more!
person stina
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay you wrote more
person Crimson Velvet
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter...I loved the part about meeting Sarah! That was wicked!
person lazymonkey
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved how Nadine kept her cool when the woman was going crazy and was going to hit her with her purse. Nadine reminds me of me. can't wait to read more! update soon!
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The chapter was really good. You already have it planned out? Thats better then me. i hope you update again soon because i can't wait to read more.
person Arainaina
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting story please update soon
person Crimson Velvet
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far this is really good...you've set up your plot nicely, and have given the reader a clear picture of where you want to take this story...don't be afraid to take risks plot-wise though...there is a formula to romantic stories (as I'm sure you already know), but don't be afraid to surprise us with something unexpected. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)
person stina
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write more asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!