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for Cold Dish

by leanntwilight

person renee
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. They are all so sneaky. I like Mannix. He surprised me. He really did take revenge and was freaking mean while doing it. I think it turn Ren on ;). Ren is surprising as well. I didn't think he would be the cute one. I like that he knew what was good for Manny and went with it no matter what Manny threatened.

Anyhow, I thought it was a pity that Mannix offed Saburo so soon after the latter beating. I wished that Mannix would keep him around for a few days so the pain could kick in and further his punishment. After hearing about how badly Manny was abused when he was young made me boiling mad and I wanted the s.o.b. humiliated.
person lividfire
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 was great(the smex) but I have been waiting for a year(nad more) to see new chapters of tricky history only to see it removed form adultfanfiction.
It is the story connecting Gravity of love and Cold dish.
Besides I feel a huge gap; what happened between the dinner after meeting Jamil and ho-ho-ho Cold dish ch 1- 'we've been sex buddies for a year'
Not fair, I want heir first sex scene, who topped, how com emannix caved and told ren about his past...
Dsamn it, I need answers to these questions.

But I'm glad you're still writting this.
I want to see you wrap these stories into a one great.
person roxy
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing job, as always. glad to see you're still with us! can't wait for the next chappie of GOL.
person Uncertainties
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome, i can't wait for more!!
person Cindyip
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sick, totally luv it. want more:)
person Eclipse-Black
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
More please.
person meep
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot, very interesting and i'm eager to know how things'll turn out hurry up and update please =)