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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
soooo good... as usual
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good start. funnie how girls can manipulate guys so easily. feel so sorry for the brother. but good. cant wait for more
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so hottt!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting beginning. I liked that you took the time to give us some information about the characters and didn't just plunge into, "Brother and sister were both so very excited, because it was tuesday!" The more you can make your readers care about the characters, the more affected they'll be by what happens to them.
So, good start and I look forward to seeing more.
So, good start and I look forward to seeing more.