rate_review Reviews

That was ... wow. Please write more?

Will there be more? I loved it!

That was good, very dark, which can be good when done right. I think you have just inspired me some more...

I like the normal parts of the story even better than the smut. You are a talented writer and have created a very descriptive and original story. The only thing that cheapened it for me was adding in the Japanese. The characters weren\'t japanese, nor was there any other use of japanese in the story. That use was simply silly when you had zack say \"hai.\" other than that, very nice job