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March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waw. Someone drugged Will. I wasn\'t expecting that. I liked how he saw the vampire. Can\'t wait to see what the vampire does and how he contacts Will! Very good chapter.
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March 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was a good beginning. I think you need to show more than tell. I don\'t know if that makes any sense but it read a little stiff. I like the droll wit and find the main character engaging. I am looking forward to where this story goes.
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I actually thought it was a good start. Nice introduction I'll be looking forward to more.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting. I want to read more!