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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was really very good, you should continue
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE! I've read this chapter several times and think that it's pure gold. You have something really good here, so please don't waste it.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm ... the narrator or the leading character seem to have a complicated personality ... i think it would be very interesting to see how her personality develops .. of course every little signs that her best friend give are hinting that her best friend likes her but she seems to be clueless and i think the climax can be made quite interesting ... youe usage of diction is also very good .. if you would feel up to it then I am all for continuing this story.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. i love the how you portray the characters you are a very talented author. please continue
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Please con tinue. ^^
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet
I wouldn't mind reading more of this
I wouldn't mind reading more of this
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the most beautiful femslash stories I've ever read. Of course I normally read more PWP stories, but anyway: GREAT JOB! I'd love to see more. :)
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is rilly good, and I hope to see the next chapter asayc.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Story is beautiful...I hope you continue because you have me hooked. nice imagery btw
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice.