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for Broken Rules

by Skyye21582

person tata12772
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow..its gettin better and better...that was a hot ass chapter sista of mine....i love it and i hope that you can continue to get the inspiration you need to finish it...could end up being something you enjoy doin this writing thing....love ya girlie:X
person Seras
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. A lot. It was simple, but you made it very descriptive. There's hardly any good stories like this out on the internet. Do keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to future chapters. ^_~
person yuri
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice. this made me so hot. it made me want jonny to shove his cock up my pussy, and fuck me senseless. i hope yo cont. this