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I think that this is great. I sobbed, I laughed. But mostly sobbed. I know the source, I know the reason and it's good. Good will come.

oh!!!! =D he kissed her! haha yay, aww matt's so nice and sweet aww and it's so sad =( y'd he have to die, but anyways love how u explained matt's death better and that he wrote a long letter and u made him thoughtful enough to do so, did he die immediately?

Katherine Elizabeth,
This is very moving and well written. I know not, what has started you on loved ones passing, but it is deeply thought, and 2 chapter in 2 days is very fast!
Carry on, but do reach back to Tango, when you are through with the exams.
And lots of luck, or "Hals und Bein" as the Germans say. (The Hungarian version of well wishing for exams is unsanitary, and will be omitted! :-)

Greetings from

John

I really like this story. write more soon

Don't you just love it when other people, no matter how well intentioned, run your life and make your decisions for you!

haha WoW u r awesome, this is idunk24@yahoo.com again, luv the whole oliver moving in, anyone else, =/ or just leaving the apartment and moving into a smaller one =(, but yeah more points to oliver-merry to me, but oh! that's so cool that matt added something new in the box! she's gna read the rest of the letter later rite, so y did he put something in the box, just thought of it, wow such good thought, hum yes, lol the parentals r funny, i think that's pretty much it, oh yeah, the oliver chuckling is cool, tho prob not appropriate at the time i guess or for the circumstances with matt, but yes, thank u so much for emailing me! WoW usually when i ask, people just say they updated, but u provided me with the story in ur email! =D and that i thank u for =) yay for fast, quick update! can't wait to hear more! u r awesome =D

lookin good

yay ur gna finish this! i'm so glad =)D i really love the whole story concept, the characters, how they were together but then not anymore but still bad friends, y did he hv to die tho, i can't wait for the emphasis on like merry finding herself, is she going to get together with oliver, i like how she found the cigar box in the treehouse, ru going to talk more bout matt's accident, when u update also, if u wouldn't mind, could u please email me at idunk24@yahoo.com. if not, hopefuly i'll be able to find ur story =) thx ~ good job! beautifully written =) and i like how u captured merry's emotions, cool name!

good start. looking forward to your update