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person lala2sparks
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo. I like it. I'm soo glad you're back.
person Victoria
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! Templeton---YOU are killing me here. That was such an awesome chapter. I loved the flirtation but (I don't mean to be critical) you can't leave me/us hanging like that!!! I love their playful banter but come on he needs to realize that he cannot possibly leave without her and fall in love!!! Seriously, that was great. Thanks for the update. Can't wait for the next installment.

Victoria
person megan
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW!

I am so glad i checked to see if you updated today. That was great.Keep it up.

How are the babies doing? My friend had a baby about the same time as you had the twins and I cant beleive how much she has changed.

person megan
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read my post. I meant my firends baby has changed a lot not my firend just in case you were confused. I think I will leave the writing to you.
person Online Gurl
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! You have to update, this story is awesome so far!
person Michelle
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay for the long-awaited new chapter! can't wait for the next one!
person ----
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You updated 'does a dorky dance'!!!! Brilliant, just brilliant! Gosh, I really love this fic, so thanks for updating.
person J
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
person Michelle
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad everything is going well for you. The chapter was great and I hope to see another one soon.
person ProdigyGirl
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! You updated! I was beginning to lose hope. I love how you cut to the chase and had Ben come straight with Olivia. And they've already had their first date! I wonder if their relationship will start to speed up or slow down. On another note, I wonder what Toby will think of all this. :) So, great chapter, and please update soon!