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person Shanna
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I read Chapter 19, and I'm in love with them both a little more. We all have scars. Very touching.
person chrissy
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!!!! i'm so glad you're writing again!!! i've had this story saved in my bookmarks for ages just hoping that you'd update it and now you have!!!!! i just adore the story and i hope that you continue it until the end. keep up the excellent writing!!!
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Templeton! In chapter 18 Olivia made me laugh because she was being her normal self singing, "juice, juice, juice," thinking Ben was gone, haha. Yay! They are officially dating. I personally don't like rich boys. I'm glad Ben is a down to earth rich boy, haha. For chapter 19 Olivia's confession of the scare was a big shocker. I empathize with Olivia because that must of have been scary. Can't Ben stop thinking about sex! Haha. Damn, what Jillian did to Ben was low and she has no integrity. Amen to everything said at the end of chapter 19 by Ben. I'm glad that both are not going to use the past to keep playing the victim instead they are going to make the best of it and that's awesome. Thanks for updating.
person ProdigyGirl
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy wow. Two chapters in less than one week?! Awesome! I don't suppose you could continue like that, right? Maybe get back into your wonderful groove of a chapter a day--it's good for my health. :D Anyway, another wow because I never guessed Livi's story; I had gotten the hints for Ben but poor Livi and now I love her mom and Violet even more. Even though that twist was really unexpected, I feel that it was just right--it helps them both understand that, like Ben said, they've both been hurt and that they both need each other. Great, amazing chapters and I hope you update soon!
person J
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm one happy chappy. Christmas came a bit early! :D
person missholliemae
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow - an update! Story is still excellent, thanks for sharing. Don't worry about not being able to update everyday like you used to - I cannot even imagine how much your little world has changed since those days. Take it easy, enjoy every moment with your family - we'll still be checking back from time to time when you get more time on your plate to write. Take care!
person fire_eyez
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated!! and it was brilliant. i like the the name of the cocktail place...very nice
person Rosei
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lots of fun. I love these two! Very good job.
Thanks!
person tata12772
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA....I love this new chapter...cant wait to see the next
person Dee
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I came here on whim hoping you would have updated and you have. I really like this story and I am glad you are able to get back to it.