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for More than Anyone

by atmosphere

person anon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
somehow i knew they'd be the next two you'd write about, haha. this seems like a great startoff... waiting for more!
person Empress
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love an author that updates as quickly as I read (and I read pretty fast). Great start so far. I'm glad you gave them some time before this happened because they truly disliked each other when they met. I'm glad you are doing a Ben/Olivia story. I see sparks already (and Ben's joblessness being an issue). Thanks for a new story.
person Mariana
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i had a feeling this pairing was about to show up! and man am i not disappointed. you like outdoing urself everytime you write? or do you just enjoy it when ur readers are blown away with each new story. But you know, i think no matter how many stories you write, Justin and Poppy will always be my favorite couple and individuals as well. well, post-high school Justin will be my favorite male character. anyways, i have high hopes for this story too! and hopefully we won't get another scare about you leaving us readers all alone, albeit to a degree it was our fault. im going to say sorry on my part because you deserve so much more credit u receive for ur stories then you get. anyways, please update sooN!
person Shanna
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I tried to review earlier, but I received an error message. Anyway I'm so happy to see Ben and Olivia again. I knew you wouldn't deny your fans, this story. Thank you so much! It has a good start and of course I'm greedy so I want more. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so pleased you decided to write their story. Hopefully we will catch up with Violet and Jamie as well.

Thanks again
person megan
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was hopingyou would do a story about these two. I am so curious as to why they hate each other
person dezzy
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love how this is a love hate kinda relationship... how the first despised each other and now the true feelings are slowly coming to the surface i love please update soon:D
person Holly
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to drop you a note to let you know I just discovered your stories, and I love them! I really love Jamie & Violet in your sotty "Better Together". I also enjoyed your first chapter of "More Than Anyone". I wondered at Ben & Olivia's interaction in Better Together of there wasn't more unlying there. I read a lot of action/intrigue type stories but I also love Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum series (kind of adventure/romance) and am a sucker for a great romance. I'm looking forward to your next update! Thanks for sharing your writing with us!
person diana
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its a good start.keep going its very interesting