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for More than Anyone

by atmosphere

person cecille
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wai! i've been praying for this story--olivia and ben are so cute together :D erm. besides, i'm a bit curious about how ben spends his days since he doesn't have to work and all.
person megan
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Keep it up. (I dont have to tell you to update soon because I know you will)
person super g
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how you've started this! I think I've read nearly every one of your stories and just keep getting better (which I didn't think was possible:) Thanks for the update, I'm off to read ch. 2! Keep up the good work!
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey hope u update soon I really like it.
person nesl247
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know I say it everytime but this is your best story... You just get better and better.
person ...
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chap, chap. See the joke there? God, I'm so funny. Nah, just kidding. About the joke part. It was hardly a joke. Anyway, before I run off to my psychiatrist, I just wanted to say awesome story, and I can't wait to see what happens between them. The concept of loving someone but not liking them is a little complicated in my head, for I can't imagine someone in love not liking the one they love, but it's an interesting concept, nonetheless. Hey, if it's got me thinking, it's definetely a great concept for a story. Take that as a compliment.
person StoryJunkie
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
er, you know, at the end of every chapter it says: "Review more than anyone" It sounds like some kind of command! LOL! Is it a contest to see which of your reviewers reviews the most? (Kind of like woodchucks chucking wood). LOL! OH, I've got to stop! I really loved this chapter. Darn it all anyway, the way you make them interact and make them say the things they say is one of the things I find most rivetting. It's like they can't help it. I know that you have special reasons for the titles you choose, but what it you named this "Against All Odds"? (At the end of each chapter, it would command us to "Review against all odds"..LOL! (Sorry, I'm on a silly roll)
person StoryJunkie
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Anon
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been so sick and the computer was down these past couple of weeks so I am extremely sorry that I havent reviewed. I think that you had to have set the world record on updating/finishing/starting a fanfiction. I think I need to call in a sick day just to read everything and get up-to-date. But keep your pace! Did you ever get that book? Hope you are enjoying it and I promise to write you a constructive review next time!
person BelieveInMe
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Only a chapter in and you have me hooked.