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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, i love this. they're so funny goin' back and forth, and harry is adorable. can we get his story too? i'm sooo curious. but don't worry, i love this as well. i like how harry KNOWS. hehehe.
anyway, is livvy still google-eyed over tony 'cause it's a safety blanket? or what? i don't get moony people. and i do adore ben.
thank you!
anyway, is livvy still google-eyed over tony 'cause it's a safety blanket? or what? i don't get moony people. and i do adore ben.
thank you!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eggman mentioned, "too bad about Hands Down" Does anyone know what that meant?
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whooo-hoooo!
score!
this is fantastic. if you can't tell, i'm geeked. i like how they realize the attraction, although i'm interested in how you're going to have livvie get over tony. the oblivious jerk.
thank you!
score!
this is fantastic. if you can't tell, i'm geeked. i like how they realize the attraction, although i'm interested in how you're going to have livvie get over tony. the oblivious jerk.
thank you!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent beginning. It's got to be the best opening chapter that you've ever written. Although, I think that about every story of yours that I've read. Still, this is going to be a good one, I can just tell. (OK, the heat is on, girl!) This definitely is NOT crap. Thank you for your high standards, but if you thought anything you write is crap, I guess I'll be going through your garbage soon, as I am STORYJUNKIE, READER EXTRAORDINAIRE! hahahahaha
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous - I was hoping you'd write Olivia and Ben's story!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm liking this story so far.... I had a feeling in the last story that Olivia and Ben would be getting together... :) Can't wait until they're in London together... and sitting next to each other in the plane! :) Unless of course I am totally wrong about this. :-P Great first two chapters! Can't wait for more!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is the cutest beginning. Poor Olivia. That was nice of Ben. I hope you update again because i can't wait to read more.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In chapter 1 and 2, awwww, Ben to the rescue and how cute to be called the bane of someone's existent.. Every time I read about Ben he makes me laugh and I think I know why because he is a bad boy, totally. Ben's momma raised him well. What Ben did must mean something to Olivia even though she tries to act like it didn't. Olivia is a cynic but that's why I like her character, hehe. It would be nice to see if Ben can break down that barrier she has around herself. Thanks for starting a new story.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Always love your stories, and this one is no exception, even after only 2 chapters. Thanks for all your hard work.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I tried to read this earlier, but got an error page when I clicked the link. Finally I was able to later and it was worth the wait. I also would have commented MUCH earlier, but after I read it I started getting errors until I chacked now. Too bad about Hands Down, but as long as there's a story it's all good.