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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo I love tension. Great chapter
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Olivia should have sat in the very front row, that way she would get a little pay back for him annoying her with a stiff neck. As much as I liked the previous story I think I'm going to end up likeing this one better. While a relationship like that would probably drive me to murder, I find wathcing (or reading) them is amusing.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stina: please refer back to chapter 6 :)
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good. your writing has improved a lot, and i thought this chappie was reallly funny.....yay!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far. Ben's character is very likeable. Liv is somewhat of a tightass by herself, but I find that when she's with Ben, she is more livelier and they make a funny duo with their bickering. Can't wait to read more.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Olivia needs to lighten up. I like Ben, why can't she see he's a cool guy! Great chapter, I love the development because I just know it is going to hit her like a ton of bricks when she admitts to her she likes him, and he isn't such a bad guy.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Chapter 3 was very good. A great show of emotion.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmm, pretzel bites. those sound good. and this story is good! i just love i-hate-you-no-i-love-you stories.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute Chapter. Now, he just has te realize it isn;t Alice he wants.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch1-3- I'm still a little indecisive about this story. I loved Ben's character from the beginning, but Liv was a little irritating in the last story. I am however extremely interested in the situation between Liv and her sister. I'm looking forward to reading more about it. Thanks for updating!!