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For the first time, I'm disappointed in Ben. Not only once, but twice. As polite as his mother taught him, wouldn't the polite thing to do was to apologize to Olivia for offending her once he came to the conclusion? And why didn't he put Sophia in her place when she called Olivia a dyke. Caught off guard or not, Sophia's despicable and him walking off with her would make it seem that he sided with her, making him just as despicable as she is. Man, that chapter rubbed me the wrong way but Sammy is so cute and he's so good with Olivia. Thanks for posting.

1) i LOVE this story. i'm a big fan of banter like that occuring between them so keep up the good work!
2) water and milk go much better than water and oil

Oh dear... now I'm going to cry... what a truly awful sister. I do hope she gets her comeupence. Soon.

I liked that chapter. I want o give Sophia a smack, right in the kisser. PLEASE don't let go to England, with Oliva, I may have to smack her.. . Oh wait she's not real. . . See what your writing does to me. It gets me all worked up. Good job.

Great story. Keep up the good work and hope u post soon............

I adore this story! Both characters are too adorable in thier quirky ways. Please, please, please... continue

awesome chapter! YAY! this is sooo exciting. I'm enjoying this story more than any other that you've written so far... (and believe me, I have enjoyed them all immensely. I am a compulsive new chapter checker). :-D Can't wait for the next one!

aww that was sweet. what was her wish?

In chapter 3 I find Harry to be a cool guy. Ben and Olivia both makes me laugh. I find them adorable being this way with one another. Olivia reminds of this song by Kelly Clarkson "Miss independent. Miss self-sufficient. Miss keep your distance, mmmm. Miss unafraid. Miss out of my way. Miss don't let a man interfere, no. Miss on her own. Miss almost grown. Miss never let a man help her off her throne. So, by keeping her heart protected. She'll never, ever feel rejected. Little miss apprehensive. Said ooh, she fell in love. What is this feeling taking over? Thinking no one could open the door. Surprise, it's time, to feel what's real. What happened to miss independent's no longer need to be defensive? Goodbye, old you, when love, is true." Thanks for updating.

xhe knows she likes him.