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well, that's it. sophie's going to die. in a very terrible manner.

and what happened to livvy's spine? hello? what? screw more beautiful, let's kick her ass. now. sic ben on her. ben, no, DON'T FALL FOR HER!

thank you!

Wow. Very emotional chapter. Very intriuging how this "dyke" situation came about. Wonderful writing.

@4: Yay! (very clever of you to arrange the "date" in chapter 3) These two wonderful characters belong to each other, and are even now helping one another through a difficult phase in each other's lives, whether they know it or not, probably because of the yawning crater of loneliness that resides within them. We find our remedies within one another, I think. Another chance encounter at the end of this chapter is a little more revealing....Ben's mom's sayings to the rescue! (We all know he can't resist that marvelous voice of wisdom in his head!)

I hate Sophia already, and she hasn't been in that long! No wonder Harry doesn't like her. Poor Olivia. Sammy is cute. I loved the chapter, so please update again soon.

In chapter 4, I can't believe that Ben called Olivia a dyke and agreed with Sophia (WTF). Sophia is a BITCH and if that was my sister I would have at least one round of a fist fight with her. You know what I empathize with Olivia. No wonder she has to have this tough exterior but inside she is really sensitive. All her life she has been put down by her sister. To make a girl like Sophia cry just say that she's fat. I can't wait until Olivia tells her sister off, takes Ben from her and then dump Ben for being a jerk, hehe. Thanks for updating.

can i say that i despise Sophia? ACK! I hope Ben apologized to her... and SOON! And that he has nothing more to do with Sophia, however I have a feeling that Sophia is going to royally mess things up. Great chapter!

ewwwww her sister's a whorrrre.

I know I have already reviewed chapter three but Ithought I should tell you that it is my favourite chapter so far.

i really like this story

loving the new story. It is so much fire in it. I love the hate relationship because hate always turn to love. Oh and I so hate Olivas sister ............wonder if ill one day love her....lol i dotnt hink so, never know. Well i hope ben puts her in her place real soon and why is Oliva send as a dyke? I not sure I just want to know