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i forgot-- thank you!

Wow - looks like there will be some serious conflict over this sister issue... can't wait I'm in the mood for some drama. Every time I read one of your stories I think that I have found my favorite one and yet each new story seems to be getting better and better then the last - I can certainly see you progressing as a writer - great work!

Hi

wanted to drop you a line and say that I like this story. I stopped reading the one about Violet, but stopped in on this one and I am enjoying the characters. I wanted to point out that if you separated the dialogue into smaller sections, instead of the large paragraphs, your stories would be easier to read.

awww u have to keep writing or ill cry lol well hope to read more soon

Oh no! I just went to your aff profile and found that you removed your Molly/Dan stories and that little snippet with Lawson/Nikki and Justin/Poppy. The Molly and Dan stories, I can let slide. But the few chapters of Lawson and Nikki are the only chapters you have of them furthering their relationships after 'Just What I Needed' (although technically it was written before I think??). I hope you repost it cuz out of all you stories, JWIN was one ending I was not too happy about but sometimes when I read the whole series over, I throw that segment between JWIN and SP and it satisfies me.

This is a great story!! One of the best I have read, is the first one I check for new chapters before I check others. U are an amazing writter, don't let anyone tell u otherwise. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow. If you ever decide to bump anyone off in your stories, you have my permission to start with Sophia. She turned me off pretty much with her first word.

I also would have reviewed earlier, but both times I tried I got that stupid connection error too.

Wow. Excellent chapter

Ok, without a doubt this is your best story. I hope you go back to your old way of updating. You know the 500 updates a day. Please update once more today.... Please..

P.S. if this comment was posted twice (well almost identically) it is due to the "Cannot connect to database error"

I thought I should just say that I hate sophia too.

And also that I have read chapter 4 three times now (and you know each time Ben STILL ends up being dragged off with sophia). Even thought you only update once a day I still check it almost every hour (dont tell my supervisior!) just in case ou do a sneeky update. You have me hooked. I am an addict.

So.... when can I get my next fix? or do I just have to sit here and rock back and forth for a bit?