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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch5- awesome.. but i'm still a little confused. when liv's talking about ben and sophia does she think they're actually together or just that he sided with her? i sincerely doubt it's in ben's character to actually be with someone like sophia, since he's well, amazing. lol, and also why exactly is toby so oblivious? i'm warming up to liv now; she's much easier to emphatize with in these chapters than previously. Thanks for updatinggg!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU UPDATED!!!! and it isnt even my birthday or anything. If I had a tail I would wag it. I was sitting and reading thinking 'so Toby finally figured it all out and he is going to ask Liv out and then Ben will get his butt into gear' and then BAM! Toby proves he is an idiot. But I dont dislike toby. He is just a bit clueless and I am sure if he knew what was going on he would have handled it better.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love it so far, I cant wait for more! I would like some more of 'Hands Down' as well. Are you going to write anymore about the last ones, Brady and Ali, Poppy and Justin, etc. or any of there children? I love the Casey and Amelia story and I would love to see more about the rest of them.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In chapter 5 I adore Sammy and Olivia needs a hug! I want Olivia to be happy I can't take this anymore. Heartbreak after heartbreak. I hate men sometimes they are so clueless. The good thing is though that Ben has finally come to his senses and apologized. Which is a good start. Awww, thanks for responding to my review. I just love music especially music that screams their heart and lungs out and Kelly Clarkson, hehe, oh and how could I forget your stories of course! Thanks for updating.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, by the way, Sammy is the cutest thing everrr.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Then you will never see London and we both know that, Olivia."
Awwwwwr! Oliviaaaaa... for once, woman, swallow your pride and let someone take care of you. Ben is an idiot for sticking with Sophia, although he more than makes up for it by waiting for her at her apartment til she gets back from work.
I'm glad to hear you're getting more reviews now. :D You definitely deserve them!
(And as always, great work! :D)
Awwwwwr! Oliviaaaaa... for once, woman, swallow your pride and let someone take care of you. Ben is an idiot for sticking with Sophia, although he more than makes up for it by waiting for her at her apartment til she gets back from work.
I'm glad to hear you're getting more reviews now. :D You definitely deserve them!
(And as always, great work! :D)
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man, olivia will accept help rite, wat r ben's dreams and y did he ue his accent? thanks for updating, looking 4ward 2 reading more as alwys
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it just keeps getting better and better. I hope Ben isn't hurt when he finds out that Olivia was cryin' over Toby. But hopefully this comedy of errors will have a happy ending. Please?
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, ok. guess that'll do me-- as long as you keep with one!
that was a harsh line of ben's, but man, it's probably the truth. how's she gonna handle it? oh man, the two of them loose in london? the hell that will be raised!
that was a harsh line of ben's, but man, it's probably the truth. how's she gonna handle it? oh man, the two of them loose in london? the hell that will be raised!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think the reason I'm enjoying this story so much is because, I can't really predict how they are going to come together. Keep up the good work, you make me want to read more and more.