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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh another chapter already.. Going to have to put you to slave labor and get these out like people in Asia gold farming. Anyways nice chapter and I really do like this story. Best one you have written.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say another great chapter. I really like the way the characters are developing. Keep up the great job.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapter 5, another very emotional chapter. Quite curious as to where this "dyke" situation came about. Does Sophia call her this just to put her down or is there some truth in what she says? And the plot thickens.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really surprised at how fast you post your new chapters. I finished reading violet and jamie's story. It was really good. I am really interested in Ben and Olivia's. I thought there could be more dynamic between the two. I can see the reasons for the actions, but they are not as developed and moving as it can be. The relationship between violet and jamie's was more developed, the relationship between the two are more tangible than ben and olivia's.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... i like that ben finally apologized... but poor olivia. She's just having the worst day. But ol' Benny boy is there to cheer her up... at least we hope :) nice work!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry i haven;t reviewed the last few chapters, i have been catching up with this wonderful story today. I love this story so much so glad that Olivia and Ben are finally getting along better.
Keep up the good work
Keep up the good work
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story even more than Violet and Jamie's and I love how often you update! I hate Sophia though...
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate to sound stupid.. but what is a "dyke"
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's funny. In the beginning Liv's character didn't interest me at all and now she's only the one I'm interested in. Ben's lost his appeal, Toby's a buffoon and Sophia, if possible, gives bitches a bad name. You haven't even introduce Sadie and I don't like her already. lolz.. jk... Thanks goodness you balance it all out with Harry and Sammy though. Great chapter. To have someone you love slip through your fingers, hurts, no matter what the circumstances. Her pain was felt as I read it. Thanks for posting.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. These last 2 chapters have been excellent.