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oh gosh, I absolutely love this story. I can completely relate to Olivia in her on-again/off-again attitude. but I can tell you this, for every person out there who doesn't review or isn't grateful for your continual (is that a word?) updates, there are ten people who love ya and would probably throw flowers at you if they knew it was you walking down the street. well, maybe not flowers, maybe liquor or something, but something, they would throw something. I know I would.

Hey busy momma, in chapter 6 Ben is being more understanding which is a good thing. I think another form of love is throwing insults at each other, hehe. I really adore Olivia's character because there is something about her that resonates with me. Ben just has to keep being honest and persistent eventually he'll understand her and know why she is the way she is. I also liked how you showed Ben's point of view on love and marriage. Since Ben has never worked hard for anything maybe this time he will and it will be for love which I think he'll appreciate more. Thanks for updating.

huh. such opposing views of love. i dunno if olivia can truly call hers 'love' though-- i mean, it was a crush. i think. a one-way infatuation that sounds like it was thisclose to stalking. and ben's a lovevirigin romantic, so yeah, i can understand his definition.

man, i love this story.

and can i see the threatening tide of lies eventually coming down on ben's head? oh yes i can.

thank you!

Chapter 7 was wonderful. Emotional, but in a good fuzzy feeling kind of way. It's fun watching Olivia and Ben transfer from enemies to friends to...well if you can't figure out to what...you have a problem. ;-)

Hey, great chapter as usual. And I must say that, even though I'm ashamed, I read your reviews. I just wanted to know what the hell those people were saying, because I could easily embarras myself with dropping a cheesy line, while it's already been said like a thousand times. And I must also say that I don't agree with the person who said it would be easier to read if you divided it into shorter paragraphs. I don't find it hard to read at all, and actually love reading long paragraphs, as when I'm reading short ones I'm usually begging for more information, because when they do write shorter stuff there's a lot of information missing. At least that's my opinion. And hopefully America's a free enough country to say this, because I'm not so sure anymore with Bush leading us all to hell. Hey, I voted Kerry but then all these other people voted Bush, and I'm so freaking mad I could practically stomp my foot right now. That's right, I'm this close to stomping my foot like a child. Nah, just kidding.

Wow, I feel like I'm on a roller coaster. Olivia's emotions are just up and down and all over the place! Ben is beginning to realize his feelings for her, just a little, so it would seem. I think Olivia will find herself liking Ben when they are in England (at least I'm keeping my fingers crossed :)). These characters are insane! And I just want to hit them over the head and knock some sense into them... I feel like I'm watching friends of mine dance around the topic and you just want to shout that the person they're looking for is right in front of them! :) Nicely done!

Another great chapter. I love it. When ever I start reading I get a knot in my stomach and a tingling in my veins. I get so much enjoymen out of your chapters. (and just a small heads up - I will be away for the next few days but dont you DARE think that I have stopped reviewing. I will always try to Review MORE THAN ANYONE)!!!!

Another great chapter! Chapter 6 explained a lot, it made certain things in the story make more sense. I can see the transition in Ben, he's starting to think of Olivia romantically, though I'm sure he doesn't know, and doesn't want to know it yet.

i love your constant updates!
the wier facts list and how she told them took me by complete surprise that i nearly pissed my pants laughing! i really like where your taking this story please keep updating:D

You managed to write another great chapter. I really like Ben and Olivia. I like the way they fight at times, and then she can just turn and be a person who is just put down and unwanted.