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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! Please add your next chapter soon!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like his secret will come out in Scotland. I'm also going to guess that when they finally get together they'll end up moving to Scotland. They'll be getting everything they want as well as being closer to Violet and Jamie.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, when I think about it, this is probably my favorite story of yours. All of yours have had a good feeling with them, but more so with this one for some reason. And going along with that Ch. 7 was my favorite one so far.
Heh, pig orgasms.
Heh, pig orgasms.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz plz plz keep it coming, I am so hooked!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In chapter 7 Ben and Olivia are funny together. Guess what? I've actually learned some interesting facts in this chapter except the stomach mucus thing. I really like knowing those kinds of facts as well. I do. Good job! I absolutely understand the accent slip because my southern accent pops out of no where sometimes. Lovely a friendship is forming. I have a feeling this trip will bring Ben and Olivia closer and I can't wait to read how Violet and Jamie is doing. Thanks for updating.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really cute chapter! Ben was so sweet.... and Olivia even wrote in her list to THANK Ben! Who would have thought? :-P Love it!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i :HEART: this story, i guess i'm a sucker for love-hate relationships, but this is extra good. i'll say it tops even draco/hermione pairing from HP. WRITE MORE!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeet, chapter 8 Selby is fine, Violet and the baby is fine and Jamie is certainly fine. I love this chapter it made me feel sentimental and my heart warm and fuzzy. I thought Olivia and Ben's moment in the kitchen was extremely cute. I think Ben is actually slowly revealing his family's status. Nice, Olivia and Ben are going to spend more time together. Thanks for updating.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you're building and deepening their relationship, and I've always found it believable - this is roughly the way my husband and I got together! We met in Russia while we were studying, disliked each other for ages, then got to know each other because we had a close mutual friend. Sixteen years and three children later...
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The facts list in Chap. 7 was just wicked. I have to tell u though that this story is addictive. I don’t have to tell u to keep up the good job because u always do.