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person Shanna
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I have been having a hard time reviewing lately because I get database errors a lot lately. Reviewing chapters 7 and 8: The airport scene was so cute, I really enjoyed it the nervous chatter was adorable, and the way he rubbed her back was so tender. For chapter 8, I think it is so cute that Ben wants her to meet his mother, I wonder if either of them realize that that's what he really wants.
person megan
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Ben is becoming very sweet. I cant wait for something romantic to happen between these two. Great chapter
person megan
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what will happen in Scotland. Will his mother like her? Will Bens secret come out?
person megan
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GRRRR Just looked back and one of my reviews that I posted a few hours ago didnt go up because of an error message so here is as much as I can remember:

Hi I'm back from my holiday did any of you miss me? I was so incredibly happy when I came home and found TWO chapters for me to read. YAY! They were amazing (as per usual). I have only read them once each and will have to read them again a few more times before I review (which I have already done)

Fun Fact: tropical fish can live for up to a week in human blood
person blondiexoxo
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw i wanna know whats guna happen with them
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww! yay! =D i want a ben!
person LKN
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The scene in the airport had me laughing so hard. I thought Ben was quirky with all his National Geographics and what not, but Olivia is definitely giving him a run for his money, with her lists and strange facts and peculiar behavior sometimes. I love how they're beginning to see each other in a different light though and how they're acquaintanceship is evolving into a friendship... and hopefully more?! SOON! I can't wait to see wha happens when they see his mother. Thanks for the chapters.
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! =D yaya, how long r they visiing jamie and vioelt 4?
person Shannon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful story telling. I have just dicovered this site and you, and I LOVE IT!!! Keep up the GREAT WORK. I an anxiously awaiting chapter 9.
person StoryJunkie
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, sweet and romantic. Definitely romantic.
The Ice Queen has a terrible weakness, I guess that we all do, no matter how strong we think we might be...
(Pig orgasms?--what kind of reference books does your mother allow you to read?!)
Both characters are lovable. This story is easy to love.