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wowwwwwwww

it worked! yaaay!

ok, i'm confused. is he going to force more cool stuff on her, or just make her pay her own way now? either way, i really hope he tells her soon-- it's be different then the typical oh-find-out-falling-out plot.

thank you!

Thank you SO much for updating!!! This whole sit being down thing was starting to drive me crazy:) Anyway, I really love this story (as well as all your others) and I hope you can continue to update!

After so many steps forward they just had to take a big one back. Maybe they won't be hooking up in England after all.

Though I'm glad there was finally an update, I don't get why you could. My profile is still saying not until March.

I. Am. Addicted. Completely, you never cease to amaze me with your talent. I am envious of your ability to write so well. Wonderful chapter. You are starting to really see how great they will be together. More, please.

HaHa, so knew that the castle was coming! Great job!

Another wonderful chapter, as always. I could just see the plot building... ::excited:: I hope you update as soon as you are able to, because this is just the best story on this site. ~_~ I hope Ben realizes that Olivia's not a materialistic girl or anything, and they both know that they are attracted to each other really soon.

Yes, you're able to update. Templeton21 is a maverick, she's so smooth, hehe. In chapter 9 since Ben is showing Olivia where he lives I don't see why he is still being so secretive. Anyone would ask questions. Doesn't Ben know Olivia a little by now. Thanks for updating.

Hi.

so I am new to this site but over the last week and a half I think I have read almost if not everything you have written. I love your stories. But I especially love this story. I was so excited to see that we had a new chapter. I loved the evil cliffhanger. I am distressed that you might not update soon. Please update soon. I cannot wait to see Ben Norfolk pull out all the stops on one Miss Grange. I have to say that this story reminds me a lot of Pride and Prejudice. Ben Norfolk is definetely Mr. Darcy and Olivia is Miss Bennett (one of my favorite stories). :-)

I'm surprised more people haven't caught onto this or maybe they have and they just haven't commented on it, but Ben is continously lying to Olivia! Every question she asks, he either just out-right lies or he just gives her a vague answer. This is going to blow up in his face because Olivia is not the kind of girl to take all of his lies in stride. Great chapter. This is such a great story because both characters are so real. Ben has serious trust issues, obviously, and Olivia is so fiercely independent, I don't see how she and Ben will ever get together. He doesn't understand the concept of money and that's all she understands. I can see though that she is beginning to question his story though.