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Thank you for updating again. You are too kind :-).

Ben is falling in love with the lovely Miss Grange. How delightful? I certainly "canna" wait for more.

I was so glad to see that there were two chapters for me to read. And WOW. They were superbly writing and amazing. I think that chapter 10 is my new favourite chapter in the story.

@9: ooh, the admin has allowed you to post this before anyone can access the site. I definitely agree with them. You are one awesome writer. Although I still don't know what a prairie skirt is (soon, I will google it), I found this chapter incredibly dramatic and intense. ON to CH.10!

I just found this story and read the whole thing in one setting. It's amazing. I love it and am absolutely hooked. Wow are you a very talented author. I cannot wait for more of this one. WOW!

@ 10 Good God, Templeton, you're going to sprain your story bone. You've out done yourself. You could probably make millions. If this is what you daily spew out of that brain of yours, all ducks already in order, you are truly a gold-mine. Wow, is that guy of yours ever lucky.

ch9-10: Ahhh. When were these posted?! Ben and Liv are soo cute together. It was great to finally meet his mother. Thanks!

Love it, love it, love it! Every chapter gets better.

I love this story! I like how fast you update too. seems kinda strange to me that since olivia is such a headstrong, seemingly brave person, she is terrified of flying and horses. and, apparently, revealing her true feelings to Ben. but since he has this problem too (at least she knows he's rich!), they are obviously made for each other. someday they will get married and move to the castle and make love in the fields of heather and have about 10 kids. based on Ben's fantasies, at least.

Just reread chapter 10 again (for the forth time) and it STILL gives me shivers reading it.

TO Anon : ah... yes you can have a character named harry potter and it not be a copyright infringement. As long as your harry potter isnt like JKR's Harry Potter (namely a wizard in training facing a bad wizard). I think JKR will back me up on this seeing she was taken to court over the use of the term 'muggle' meaning non magical person. Another writer wrote a story (before the HP books) and had the term 'muggle' to mean a certain group of people (I am not entriely sure on the details but I think they were space mutants or something like that). JKR won. Hope that clears things up. BTW I went to school with a boy named James Potter I am sure he wouldnt be charged with copyright infringement if he wrote an autobiography :)

Ooooo more tension. I am loving this story. AND you are back to updating regulary. YAY. Cant wait to see where this is going.