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WHO IS JILLIAN PHILLIPS? Evil cliffie! He so already loves Olivia. Great update!

oh mannn!!!!!!!!! surprising that ben should be feeling like this, but hopefuly it doesn't get 2 mushy? i dno, or mebe that's just me but beautifully written decriptions! thanks for ur updates! =)

@11 Honestly, the twists and turns in the tale of Olivia and Ben are extremely addictive. I think I'm in story heaven. This is MUCH better than the library.

So glad the site is back up and running, great couple of chapters, i love this story it has a completely different feel from the others, cannot wait to see what happens next.

You are still surprising me with different twist. Keep up the good work. Oh, and I'm so happy that Ben is finally realizing that he is falling in love with her. I can't wait until she opens her eyes as well. Now what are they going to do about this new development (ex-girlfriend) *rubbing my hands in anticipation* I can't wait until the next chapter. And I would like to see them back in Chicago, you know back to real life for Olivia.

The more chapters you add, the more I love this story!!! Does his secret come out in the next chapter?? I can't wait to see what her reaction is!!! It'll be so awesome!

nice story so far. but can I just say; you can't use 'Harry Potter' as a name in an original story. It's probaby like copywrited? In the tiny chance that you've never heard of JKR etc. - oh but wait, you have HP fanfiction, so, yeah

oh, now THAT'S some famous last words if i ever heard them.

thank you!

ps if he explained to livvy why he's so touchy about his money, she might be a bit understanding?

oh, fantastic.

has she realized he's back to calling her livvi? haha. he's got it baaaaad.
at thank goodness she's realizing it. the oblivious thing was a tad annoying.

thank you!

In chapter 10 and 11 manly Ben was being romantic and sweet, awww. I wonder what Jillian did to Ben to make him dislike her so much. Olivia and Ben are both adamant deniers but there is some physical attraction going on. "You've got the map come get to me. These knuckles break before they bleed. Tear out these veins that own my heart. This skin that wears your lasting marks. I've built these walls come get to me, come get to me. Is this your lesson, a slight discretion. The lines that keep you, the lines that sweep you. Lock the doors from the inside. Your face is so contagious, it wears announcements. It leaves me breathless, I won't forget this. I won't forget. Sometimes it gets so hard to breathe. Your eyes see right through me. Let the walls have their say..." It's one of my favorite songs by Emery and I just wanted to give you a long review:) Thanks for updating.