schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Templeton21 guess what? This website got me all confuse so I had to go start at your profile which lead me to read your profile. If your baby is due in August guess who's birthday is in August as well and is a Leo. Me that's who, haha. AWESOME! I guess I'll stop adding the 21 at the end of your name in July. You must be excited about graduation as well and your husband's name is Justin that's cool. Both of you are good I hope. Okay back to reviewing chapter 12, Ben the imperfect, spontaneous, confusing and rebel hero, hehe. Why is Toby frowning unless he has always known Olivia's feelings for him but he chose to ignore it because he's afraid it might ruin their friendship, blah, blah, blah... Excuses I would say. I dislike it when feelings linger. Ben is crazy kissing a girl like that, haha. Thanks for updating.
schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting with bated breath and you did not disappoint. Fan-freakin'-tastic! Stupid Toby, of course he would be jealous. I can't wait for more!
schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! They kissed! and wow what a kiss. *sigh* I love this story. Cant wait for my next fix.
schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
violate her against the wall! violate her against the wall!
well, now it gets interesting. its nice how livvi realizes he's fablously wealthy but trying to hide it-- ok, so maybe his secret is out. kinda.
and what's this with tony? please let it only be a big brother thing. how sticky can a situation get?
and poor livvy. i wish you could just get over it, but i realize feelings don't work like that. but ben's there for you! in any position you want him!
:D
thank yoU!
well, now it gets interesting. its nice how livvi realizes he's fablously wealthy but trying to hide it-- ok, so maybe his secret is out. kinda.
and what's this with tony? please let it only be a big brother thing. how sticky can a situation get?
and poor livvy. i wish you could just get over it, but i realize feelings don't work like that. but ben's there for you! in any position you want him!
:D
thank yoU!
schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man... I didn't even know you posted! I kept checked the main categories page to see if there was a status update but didn't see anything. Luckily i browsed in anyways and saw 3 chapters! Made my monday. Scotland was sooo romantic. I thought you were gonna allow them to get down and dirty in one of the castles but you didn't =( It's cool though, them kissing and making Toby jealous more than made up for it. Not that I want Olivia and Toby to get together anymore. It just seems like Ben and Olivia advanced a little. Please don't makeus wait too long!! Thanks for posting!
schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how the romance is taking some time to develop - I feel like we are getting a wholistic picture of these two characters as individuals not just a couple which can be so typical of romances. I like them both - they are strong and independant. Also glad to see that your updates are going through with all the confusion on the site, your updates are one of the highlights of my day! Thanks for all of your hard work and for sharing it with us.
schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!
Dear Admin...
March 1st - you've got to be kidding me! There was NO mention of waiting until March 1st on the main page - in fact the message says that the downtime will be for about 5 days until the glitch is repaired and that message was posted on the 7th - 6 days ago - so the site should be up and posting should be back to normal. If the authors are getting seperate information regarding posting it should be included in the main page for everyone to see so we know how much downtime we are facing. It only seems fair to be honest with the readers as well as the authors. Are your saying that this glitch is going to take weeks to fix?!!? You have to be crazy - there are other quality sites on which authors can post their work that have significantly less downtime then several weeks in a row. (FictionPress.com) If you don't have the authors and the readers checking in what is the point of having a website such as this one at all?
Additionally, it would seem much more professional if instead of threatening an author on their review page you were to e-mail them privately with any concerns you or the board may have. To 'admonish' them publically is rude and unprofessional when it seems as if the miscommunication is on your part not theirs.
Thank-you.
Dear Admin...
March 1st - you've got to be kidding me! There was NO mention of waiting until March 1st on the main page - in fact the message says that the downtime will be for about 5 days until the glitch is repaired and that message was posted on the 7th - 6 days ago - so the site should be up and posting should be back to normal. If the authors are getting seperate information regarding posting it should be included in the main page for everyone to see so we know how much downtime we are facing. It only seems fair to be honest with the readers as well as the authors. Are your saying that this glitch is going to take weeks to fix?!!? You have to be crazy - there are other quality sites on which authors can post their work that have significantly less downtime then several weeks in a row. (FictionPress.com) If you don't have the authors and the readers checking in what is the point of having a website such as this one at all?
Additionally, it would seem much more professional if instead of threatening an author on their review page you were to e-mail them privately with any concerns you or the board may have. To 'admonish' them publically is rude and unprofessional when it seems as if the miscommunication is on your part not theirs.
Thank-you.
schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!MORE!MORE!
schedule
February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like weird kisses like that. Hoo! that was hot! Ben to the rescue! Nicest rescue I ever saw. er, read, I mean. (Oh, the pictures in my mind that are drawn by Templeton have GOT to be the best pictures of all!)
schedule
February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you.. Great chapter, and it is nice that I can finally read something after the whole site issue thing.. I hope you keep up the great work.