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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely story, I really enjoyed it. Your writing is fantastic, and I'm wondering if you have been able to publish anything yet? Also, I had twins myself, so I know what you are going through!! It's a tough but wonderful club we are a part of.
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story.
You made the characters seem so familiar, like a warm bedside story, as though they could truly be any random pair. It had just the right balance of description, so I can tell
that you really thought about this story and didn't try to hurry through, which is a mistake many new writers make all too often.
I think I will enjoy reading the rest of your work, if it is all as comparable to this one. Thanks.
You made the characters seem so familiar, like a warm bedside story, as though they could truly be any random pair. It had just the right balance of description, so I can tell
that you really thought about this story and didn't try to hurry through, which is a mistake many new writers make all too often.
I think I will enjoy reading the rest of your work, if it is all as comparable to this one. Thanks.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. I really loved it.
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories in here... definitely! Congrats!
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved this story. are you gunna write anymore new stories? hope u do
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Templeton! No chapters to read so I stop checking then bam! Three chapters to read in one day. In chapter 20, I like this line from Harry, "It took me twenty-seven years to become this guy. Why change after all of that work?" Hahaha, good line. I thought Olivia had a good answer of her feelings for Ben and how she now feels about Toby. I'm glad you gave us readers a little insight into Harry and Anne's relationship and family life. I'm also happy for Olivia. Chapter 21, goodness Olivia's apartment sounds like my dorm. Ben is a keeper for sure because he stayed with Olivia when she had cramps. Now that's love, haha. Ben is so sweeeeet to Olivia. Chapter 22, another yay for mentioning Jamie, Violet, and Selby. The guys were funny in this story. I'm gonna miss Olivia and Ben,truly. Thank you very much for finishing this lovely story. I've enjoy reading it from beginning to end. See your story just proves that a story can be awesome without a love scene from the two main characters. Thanks!
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@21: those were like wedding vows....
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was sweet. I'm glad I checked you out again. You've been on my mind for a few days now. That was a totally sweet story, and look at all the freakin hits you got when you didn't post these last two chapters right away. I mean, half those hits belong to me, I'm estimating...lol. There's something about your style, you know, that's very compelling and warm.
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww, i'm really sad that ended since it's such a fantastic story, but all good things come to an end. I just hope that's not the last time we here from ben and olivia (or jamie and violet). :D
this story is probably my favorite story that i've read, and i've read a lot. all the chapters were really well written. hope it continues in your furture writing.
this story is probably my favorite story that i've read, and i've read a lot. all the chapters were really well written. hope it continues in your furture writing.
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's a fantastic story , my favorite fanfic !! I'm happy with this ending, it's so beautiful, and sad because there will be no update anymore about Ben and Olivia TT I was always looking for one, I kind of hope we will know more about their future but that's your choice ^^ and I'll be looking for your future works =D