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I love this story I wish you can update this soon

I LOVE THIS STORY, IT IS THE BEST, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE ASAP, please. :D

YOU ARE BACK! YAAAAAY. I have missed you and Olivia and Ben (sophie not so much). I really hope this review will get up. I have been having a lot of trouble getting on to the site. I saw that your story was updated a while ago but I just couldnt get to the reviews. I like your style. I love this chapter it is definatelty one of my favourite ones. YAY! Im sorry if I dont review as much (it is because I am on dial up and it takes so long to load and then it turns out to be an erroe page GRRR) but just know I am reading and loving your story!

Hi Templeton21!

I am so glad you posted. I just finished reading it. I loved it! I wanted to tell you that you are such a wonderful storyteller that I just fly through your posts. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I love these two, Ben and Olivia. Welcome back!!!

Excellent! I like the names translated into Celtic. You really like to add such interesting tidbits to your stories which make them more than just feel-good romances. I kind of feel like you\'re teaching me stuff. (Never too old to learn new stuff). I knew this one guy who didn\'t know why there was a \"p\" in Stephen and he was a linguist! He ought to take up another language and find out. Anyway, that was a bit off topic. The location you picked (the aquarium) is really refreshing too. And the things thrown in about their friends make me feel like they aren\'t the only ones on the planet, which can happen in romance tales. I hope Olivia soon understands that lying and not telling the whole truth are two different things...I really like Ben. I want him

You do realize now, I\'m incredibly late for work.

Yay! The site is back up and I can access your stories again. My favorites are Jaime and Violet. I was glad to see them make an appearance here as well. I can\'t wait to see who caves first- Ben or Olivia. Hope you can update soon now that the site is up and running!! (PS- Were you thinking of ever writing a story about Wallace and Hannah? Just curious.)

Mercy!!!! *chains you to a computer screen* "Write, write!!!!" I'm in love with this story. And Toby? What the hell is his problem? *o.k. maybe you should eat for the sake of the child*

I like that I didn't see the sister in this chapter and that her mother was so nice. This story can only have 2 main bitches, and those positions are already filled.

OMG!!!!!!!!! Your so awesome!!!! I love it!!!!

Ahh...the relationship...or plot thickens. Loved it.