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You've made my Sunday worth staying awake for, haha. In chapter 15 templeton21 did you just mention Kid n' Play and Wham, hahaha. Olivia needs to set Sophia straight by bringing her a notch or two down. Geez, I really want to strangle Sophia. So Ben is actually the one who is afraid to let anyone in. I'm happy that Ben makes Olivia feel beautiful which counts more than words or gifts. Sammy is the man because he stepped right up and danced with his sister, haha. Yeah, songs by the likes of Etta James, The Flamingos, Billie Holiday, Ella Fitzgerald, etc. last forever and ever. I'm glad I was expose to them as well. THANKS for updating.

I really love this story. The growing attraction between Ben and Olivia is beautiful. I thought it was great how he now perceives Sophia in such a negative light. I can't stand her. I just hope that Ben can open up to Oliva and not stuff everything up.

Wow,

Hello my name is Maria and i have twins, i found them to be the easiest to raise for some reason. last night i was bored and looking through AFF for a good story. then i can accross yours and i have to say it took my breathe away. i cried, laughed was shocked and now i'm holding my breathe to know if he'll tell her how he truely feels for her. I never wanted two people together so much as i do these two. i know that your time with your family is very important now so i want to thank you for taking the time to update. you have a new fan. Thank you!

Congrats on the graduation and the twins. That is wonderful news. It is amazing that having newborn twins has not stopped you from writing great stories. This was a great chapter, and left me wanting more. I always look forward to your updates.

YES! You came back. I check every couple of days to updates on your stories. I just absolutely love them and they are the only reason I stop by the site. It's great to see you back writing. good luck and can't wait for more.

My favorite couple got their story updated...WOOT!

"He didn’t mind that a piece of paper couldn’t slip between them at the moment." <<< YES! I love it

great new chapter!! it was awesome! i was like, YES!!!!! an update!!!!! alright!! and it didnt disappoint me but rather, it left me wanting more! Great work.

ben is being a coward towards his feelings. sammy is too cute by the way! great chapter!

I always love your stories! Please update soon.

Thank You! Thank You!!!!! Thank God you are BACK!!!