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for More than Anyone

by atmosphere

person Kina
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Always had this thought it my mind that I had read all of your work but I just found out a couple of days ago that I hadn't.. I've read 'Better Together' and a few days ago, I started to read 'More Than Anyone'. Love your work! Brilliant you are! :) Hope you can continue writing 'More Than Anyone'. Can't wait! :)

Thanks and peace!

xx
person Kina
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Turns out I've also read 'Hands Down'. I get distracted easily...sorry I forgot to mention this in one review: Congrats on the twins!!
person Asayake
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to drop by and mention that I love this story. I love your characters. I can relate to Olivia being fiesty with her friends but clamming up in the presence of her sister. One of my favorite aspect of this story is the setting. I'm a Chicago native and a student at the UofC, so it makes it easy to envision the characters in the situations you've described. I understand that your busy, and I'm not going to beg for an update (I'm a writer too, but a lazy one ;), but I would love to see how this ends.

One thing I've noticed is your use of the word 'weary' instead of 'wary'. Weary is for exhaustion.

Anyway, thanks for writing!
person LKN
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... what a coincidence, I just got back from vacation and yours is definitely over. lolz... jk... It seems like you've had so much happening in the span of what... a year?? How impressive is that? Marriage, finishing school and having a family... And you got a boy and girl!! I'm still trying to convince my husband to give me a girl and its only been 7 years. Well congrats on everything and thanks for the finding the time to let us know how you are and updating. I swear you take multi-tsaking to a whole new level.
And that chapter was so sweet. I would have been harassing you if you had Ben flirting Liv's sister and left us hanging there. Til the next chapter...
person StoryJunkie
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@ 15: I like the way they always are thinking the same thing...
person StoryJunkie
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@14: Well, it's been said already, but let me add my voice to the chorus: Congratulations on the safe delivery of your babies. I got shivers when I saw their names. They are absolutely lovely names. Did J pick the boy's name, and you pick the girls? Wow. My friend just went into labour today, so her husband was not at work today. 11th. full moon. (She was due on the 4th) This is their second child. The first one didn't make it, so I'm really crossing my fingers for them. It's nearly 9 pm, and we haven't heard anything yet. It sounds as if you guys are getting a fresh start, and I'm glad that you haven't forgotten about us, and had mercy on us. I re-read #13 just to refresh myself, and it's as if I read it yesterday.
person challen
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh goody! i was waiting for an update on this. Thank you sooo much. it's a great story.
person megan
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful.

Just beautiful. Good work.
person Pipp
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So glad you are back, cannot believe how much i have missed your writing. Have reread all your other stories waiting for you to come back.

Hopefully Ben will have the confidence to admit his true feelings soon.

Thanks again
person Minako
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*absofriggenlutely shocked* O-o I love this story to death! <3