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by atmosphere

person Sylvia
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really love your story... Please update soon...:)
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost cried when I saw you updated and I almost cried at the end of the chapter. I'm so happy they are finally getting to the good part, and by that I don't means sex, I mean realizing their feeling for each other. You are doing an excellent job, and your quality of writing definitely has not suffer from having twins.
person Youdontsay
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow your stories are amazing! And this one it totally one of my favorites.

I love the slow progression of the story and the fact that they don't just jump into things. I sense some drama coming with Todd, just hope that Olivia knows what's good for her! 'Cause if Todd comes between Livi and Ben now I'll want than anything to hit his head with a shovel! Keep it up!
person blondiexoxo
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey that was good im glad ur writing again..i hope everythin is going good with u ....well ttyl
person ProdigyGirl
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!

We've finally got some genuine Ben/Olivia action! I thought it was perfect how you had them move that next step during the night--it made it seem even more intimate and special.

The slight twist with Toby was also clever, but I am frankly more interested in Ben and Olivia's relationship.

Sublime chapter and please update soon!
person pyrostarglow
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She's back!
And congratulations on the twins.
Story was amazing and wonderful, and now I must go read it again!
Joyfulness!
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here's #10,000 for you. Love it.
person Sylvia
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please...
person bluetoo
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on the twins! I hope you are all well and happy. I did not think you would return, but I am glad you have. I love your stories and I look forward to reading more of them. The latest chapter of More Than Anyone is excellent. I love the interplay between Olivia and her siblings. Is Ben going to put the sister in her place? And Sammy is so cute.
Not to be too much of a pest, but do you plan to continue Hands Down? (I am providing a little encouragement if that is what you need. I love John's character- he is so in need of Emma and her love.)
Anyway... YAY you are back!!!
person Victoria
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah an update!! I am so sorry I totally missed this update and just read it tonight. It is getting steamy between Miss Bennett and Mr. Darcy. I love this story and I am so glad you were finally able to update.