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This is my favorite story of all time. but i wish you would get going on it i know you dont have time just like the rest of us it is just i really like this story so when i actually have the time from working and come on here to see if you had written then i am saddened when you have not updated but it is ok i would rather you take your time to do a good job on it then to have a crapy story but please the suspense is killing me and i really want to get to the end of this story just dont leave us hanging to much if you decide to not ever finish it......tootles Lindsey

Wonderful chapter. Tody is jealous, and i'm glad she seen right through it. i love how you ended the last chapter with them together, just to be together(i hope that makes sence) can't wait to read what happens in the morning.

So... I loved the chapter. You know, just a few minutes ago, I was bored and decided to check out my favorite sites and I came across this site. I saw this story and thought 'Hey! It sounds familiar and not boring at all, so check it out!' and hey, I did know this story but forgot about it, sorry by the way though I don't know why I would apologise for something like that, I don't even know who the hell you are... But anyway, I knew the story and so I was reading chapter 16 and listening to the song I'm Not Missing You from Stacie Orrico, and then I thought I missed this story man! So I actually was missing the story as opposed to what Stacie Orrico is singing. Wait, why the hell would I say that? I'm missing my point. What was my point? Oh yeah! I loved the chapter, I really did. Jeez, my review is huge. Well, at least I'm making up for all the times I didn't review. At least I don't think I ever reviewed your stories before.. Ah well, goodbye now, and you should thank your lucky stars this is all you get. I'm really annoying when I've got time on my hands and have nothing better to do than praise a story to the heavens.. I could delete this whole review, but then I'm not in the mood to write another one, and hopefully I got my point across. Which was to praise this story.

In chapter 16, I did not know that Ben could be that sappy, hahaha. When guys are sexually frustrated it's not pretty being around them so basically I relate it to the male version of PMSing, haha. Sweet chapter. Toby sure is moody but I don't think he's sexually frustrated though. I think Toby is just looking out for Olivia but I hope he doesn't cross the line. Happy belated birthday Templeton! Thanks for updating.

Every chapter you write of this story makes me love it more and more...I loved it from the beginning and it still gets better!

I love it!! This is my favorite story of all. I can't wait for more. Ben and Olivia are made for each other, and I like how you're confusing Toby. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Update SOON!!!

You've made my day - I love this story, and I was beginning to think you weren't going to add any more. Brilliant stuff.

I now have read everything you have posted on here except for 'Hands Down'. Really looking forward to the coming chapters of 'More than Anyone' I love this story!

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Ohhh I have confused myself. Will have to read 'Hands Down'. Thought i'd leave it till it was completed but guess not!

I was so relieved that you actually updated I love this story very much Love the plot too