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for More than Anyone

by atmosphere

person twstdmind
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ben and Olivia's story has been my favorite. Whenever I need that boost of romance, I come here. I love these two characters and I would love if you could have an epilogue of sorts but at the same time, the last chapter reads like a perfect conclusion to their story and then the rest is up to our imagination. You're a wonderful writer and I always look for any new stories you've uploaded/updated. You've got amazing talent and thank you for sharing it with us!
person Franticstalkersunion
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finding a complete version of more than anyone has made my week! I was almost heartbroken when you said it was on haitus on fp. It's magnificent as expected and I completly loved it! Brilliant! Can't wait to read more of your work

FSU
person sisbamboo1
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how many times I have come back to this story because I've lost count (and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed, I just get so caught up in the story I forget everything else!). I can guarantee you that it's been more than 10 times. I am in the double digits and this is not an exaggeration. I know that anytime I need a good bit of romance that all I have to do is read More Than Anyone. I always melt into a puddle of mush whenever I read it and the best part of it is that it's not just some silly drivel and cutesy moments. I love how you let the readers into almost all of your characters' thoughts. It really makes me wish I had a Ben, too. And I have to say that even though I miss your other stories terribly, I am so, so, so, so glad that this one is still up. I adore Olivia and Ben. I really can't get enough of this story. I sincerely wish you all the best with all your other stories :) I hope I mentioned enough times (I don't think that's possible) how much I love this story but I need to say is once more: I LOVE this story.

Mariana
person Lisa
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know this story has been up forever and you probably don't check these reviews anymore. But I just wanted to say that I loved this story! LOVED IT! I could have kept reading about Ben and Olivia for many many more chapters!
person mona
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i got to the end and im like wat no it cant end like that so plz can you keep writing it i just loved ben and olivia so much if you dont want to keep writing ive got to say youre a really good writer
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU TOOK DOWN YOUR AFF TOO?!?

:(

Now I'm regretting that I didn't read all of your stories, only most of them. I started reading you on here, then found you accidentally on ff a while ago. I knew you were taking down your fp account work, but I thought maybe you'd keep these up since it is more obscure. Well, maybe you could do what some other authors are doing and close your blog/journal to members only. You could approve your members and check to make sure they don't rip you off. Just an idea...? If not, I'll certainly miss these. I've reread, on here, The Prize, and on fp, Ghetto Gospel sooo many times it's gonna be sad to not be able to find them again. Anyways, I'll continue to read your blog!
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Below is from Twist Their Emotions on fp, in case you were wondering.

Anon 2009-06-04 id # 3000126412
YOU TOOK DOWN YOUR AFF TOO?!?

:(

Now I'm regretting that I didn't read all of your stories, only most of them. I started reading you on here, then found you accidentally on fp a while ago. I knew you were taking down your fp account work, but I thought maybe you'd keep these up since it is more obscure. Well, maybe you could do what some other authors are doing and close your blog/journal to members only. You could approve your members and check to make sure they don't rip you off. Just an idea...? If not, I'll certainly miss these. I've reread, on here, The Prize, and on fp, Ghetto Gospel sooo many times it's gonna be sad to not be able to find them again. Anyways, I'll continue to read your blog!
person dimasilaw
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uhm.. i'm kinda confused by what olivia said about not having stayed at one of the north star hotels... didn't they stay there when they both went to london? 'coz i remembered that ben volunteered that she could have a free stay there since his "friend" supposedly owns it. it was even mentioned that they booked a penthouse...
person Noie
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still my favorite out of all your stories!
person Anon
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good!!